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KIND OF LIKE A DREAM
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KIND OF LIKE A DREAM |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Lying here beside you while you sleep Peace within me, all anxiety allayed I drift slowly into a different realm It is kind of like a dream Only how much better than a dream For this is real, this is our life Together now in this time as before Holding each other with love and respect Understanding and compassion so magnified Your love has completed my life You are all I have ever wanted and more Just thinking of you brings a smile to my face Laughter to my lips, a glow to my soul All the little things we now share The look on your face when you smile All the many things I love about you The love you share with your child The joy you bring your grandchildren The compassion you give your friends Life with you, my love, is a constant joy A source of everlasting happiness Kind of like a beautiful dream, A dream that has come true Only and always, my love, with you. Pepper |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Pepper, I think everyone should know a dream like this. Kethry. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A beautiful dream...James |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Such a beautiful dream |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this makes me smile  |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
There's nothing better than life being better than a dream. Enjoyed. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!! Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Lavenia, this is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as this shines with true loves smiles and joy, yay! (kiss on cheek) We are all so happy for you, sweet friend, here's some bluebird of happiness hugs just for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lavenia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Simply beautiful!! You seem to have pleasant dreams! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know how that is |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This sweet poem is like peppermint for it is a breath of fresh air. What a warm and loving feeling you portrayed with your words--secure, tender, comforting, fulfilling... Warm hugs, EA |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
This will be great in the book the Wind is invisible. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Dear Friends, one and all, thank you for your kind comments.. I think I now have something kind of like a glow Pepper |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... beautiful work! *S* |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is a dream I am still waiting for someday to come true Dawn |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely dream...much enjoyed! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
peppermint35 - a love it must be. My vote is cast... BC |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Mine too, sure would like to see your poem in the book. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Pepper dearest one this is so perfect it speaks your name in every syllable, how could it fail not to contain all that is good and true and wonderful for you wrote it. Whenever I read your work, I’m carried on the wings of dreams to places where my heart hears what my eyes see. Your words caress my soul with wonder, your voice sings in my soul, it sings arias of delight, arias of intricate weavings that mesh with my spirit and carry me aloft. You know I love this utterly utterly utterly and YOU darling heart are a writer of really beautiful lines that weave me into beautiful dreams, this is superbly done. Exquisite writing beloved one utterly utterly utterly exquisite I love this one truly perfect. I love it utterly utterly utterly love it A resounding YES, if this isn't included it will be a travesty   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
This is beautiful! ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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