Open Poetry #25 |
Return it |
Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
What can you do with IT? pick it stick it dip it love it Push it pull it beat it kick it yank it slap it hold it know it sold it bought it taught it show it blow it freeze it heat it kneed it please it breath it squeeze it read it kiss it bite it try it sip it fly it tie it throw it own it watch it spot it write it quit it rip it tip it teeze it weed it smoke it tote it walk it catch it do it done it did it return it vote it You never know how many things you are able to do with IT. Thomas AKA Rogue--- ITs in the name |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
LOL This one should be put in the book for a laugh. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Thomas, I just love this creative cadence you used here, sweet friend, I toon found it curious why you titled it "Return It" as though that is the key thing to do with "it", this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
creative indeed, fun write |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I remember the first time this was posted... and I smiled then... and am still smiling now... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Love it! Now you have me going with a word. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very rogueish But seriously, it's just darling. Gets my vote. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...I did it! Peace & Light, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Cool, fun write...much enjoyed! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
What can we do with IT? Vote for IT!! "Love makes the world go around" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hahahaha awesome - made me smile this morning - a keeper xxoo |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
I Loved the visuals while reading this - lol fresh & creative |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
really creative fun poem! i am voting for this...book needs light pieces too! you made me smile. thank you. take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Just wrote it for the fun of it LOL Thank you all of you for reading it Thomas |
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