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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) 
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poetry is just lines of words wrapped in a riddle it can be simple or tasking waiting for the right person to come along asking are these truths or lies will it be liked or despised should I even try do I have the will to risk catching the thrill of some one drinking in my thoughts as it rolls off of their tongues when read will they love my touch and pout if not given enough or simply read my words then move on to another poets attempt to put forth their soul for others to judge these things I will never know unless tried so again I write today tomorrow and the next night Some day this Rogue will get it right  [This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (02-20-2003 07:57 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well try is all any of us can do isn't it? enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yes, yes, and you always give such a valiant effort! (big hugggsssssss) I think that is the real meaning of poetry; to grow every write and understand and learn more each time in finding the best approach to answering the riddle, to inspiring another, to feel rewarded for what your own heart wrote! This is marvelous, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, this has my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very cute poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
will they love my touch and pout if not given enough... ~*~ Oh, do I have a Moth for you.... JM where are you? He's questioning whether or not you pout! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Just keep on writing--for yourself! If someone who reads your poetry enjoys and understands it, that is a bonus! P.S. I enjoy reading your musings! Warm hugs, EA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
poetry is just lines of words wrapped in a riddle it can be simple or tasking waiting for the right person to come along asking are these truths or lies will it be liked or despised should I even try do I have the will to risk catching the thrill of some one drinking in my thoughts as it rolls off of their tongues when read will they love my touch and pout if not given enough or simply read my words then move on to another poets attempt to put forth their soul ================================ the moth is here...but shes not pouting..she is smiling...and drinking in these lovely poetic ponderings..and...shes voting  well done poet sir... thank you sunshine for directing the moth towards the light.  "Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky ... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed this |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Must all poetry be truth? Must it be a soul-wrenching cry? Should it be? I so no. Poetry is whatever we form it to be...larger than life or life itself. Nice ponderings, Thomas. *s |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tis true, and all we can do. This gets my vote. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
I thank you all the Rogue |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yep, a book item. Love the way you pouted this out. Please keep that attitude. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Poetry is whatever we form it to be...larger than life or life itself. You said it well and it sure gets a vote from me. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
You know, I'm having a great time reading all these poems of yours. You are definately very talented dear friend.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very good book submission.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh wow!! Now this I love! Gladly give it my vote! ~Hugs~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
My talent is a mere shadow compared to the people I have been lucky enough to meet at this website. |
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