Open Poetry #25 |
From These Eyes |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Drowning, in pools of blue bedrooms of dreams lost to you. I seek ... only the true of heart, of mind, soul of you. Reaching, to answer why's out of maybe's, blind to lie's. Thinking, as the tear dries ... that's escaping ... from these eyes. Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hi Craig...good to see your words. Always a joy... |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
quote: I really enjoyed this part, It just sounded so nice, and powerful. Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Reaching....always reaching out, to see inside. Softly written, Craig. |
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seven_conscious Junior Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 33 |
always like pieces that are visually aesthetic as well as well written. enjoyed... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I love how you weave words into a basket of thoughts and feelings. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Barry - always good to hear from you. Connel - thank you. KC - sometimes the reach is more difficult then the look inside, ... sometimes its the other way around. Thank you for your many smiles. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
7 - thank you, glad to see you. Chris - Basket weaving 101 ... got a B+, happy to share my thoughts with you. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
bedrooms of dreams lost to you. Stunning phrase.... an excellent work. I will be looking for more of your poetry the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
drowning in pools of............ahhhhhh turned my brown eyes blue.......... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lost soul I seek ..... in the room of dreams heart hugs.... ME~ Take me where the tides start |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Craig, do enjoy your writes, always from your heart. xxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Silver_Tryst Member
since 2003-03-10
Posts 64MT |
Great write...intersting Shayne |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
very well written. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Awwwwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your wonderful words do! (big hugggssssss) May your dreams bleed into reality and always feel like home, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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