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Open Poetry #25

Wordplay for regards

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

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of Depression

0 posted 2003-02-20 02:20 PM

The light of night is sightless sounds
The beat petite of sweet heart pounds
Footfalls dread calls down halls empty
Pillows with shadows from windows scary
Door opens slowly end thought bend to fear
Nothing yet something through door brings near
In darkest night with fast heartbeat
Her bed not empty her cat now is there.

Gloom
Something to think upon
not meant to be particularly good poetry
just words scattered upon the blue pages

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-02-20 02:29 PM

Scatter some again....

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

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of Depression

2 posted 2003-02-20 02:32 PM

Thank you, Sunshine
Pleased you enjoyed,
Perhaps more later, enough of my dreary poetry has been cast
For now

Gloom

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2003-02-20 03:09 PM

enjoyed this

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

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California

4 posted 2003-02-20 03:17 PM

Professor,

This is wonderful word play. Read it several times. Loved every line. Thank you. I almost missed this as I was just going out my door, thought I'd take a quick peek and read a poem or two. Such talent!

Smiling here. Thanks again,
With warmest regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-02-20 03:34 PM

You "scatter words" with the best of Pip's poets, dear Professor!

Warm hugs,
EA

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