Open Poetry #25 |
A Journey |
Fauxreal Junior Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 38 |
Crossing the valley of Sorrow Into the mountains of Hope The calming breeze Will put you at ease Clear water to Help you cope. You travel barefoot To these mountains Over rustic and Rugged Terrain- Wondering How long the journey will take Or if you'll ever Get back again. Seconds turn To minutes- Then hours- Sticky humid nights Into days, While the wild Animal eyes Of lies Paralyze you With their gaze. Making you wonder With each chest Fall and rise If all poachers Of the heart- Don a lamb's diguise. Still you do not give up On your trek Let those sleeping wolves lie Keep your step Stir them not- And take your place... Right back ON TOP. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is sooooooo wonderfully said, sweet friend, may we respect those all around us as patience and love is what helps make the journey easy instead of being uncomfortable or making others uncomfortable! (sigh) This is marvelous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Fauxreal, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-16-2003 04:02 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is very touching and sweet. Thank you, Eric |
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