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Kellie545
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since 2003-02-20
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0 posted 2003-02-20 02:08 PM


lying in bed at night
i can feel your arms around me,
underneath the sheets and quilts
i can hear your heart beating,
but i open my eyes and you are gone.
twinkling stars in the sky
are mocking me, i'm all alone.
i pray to them that  you'll come,
just as you do in my dreams,
that you'll come after me. come to me soon.
so where's my prince charming,
the guy that sings his heart out to
his love in all his emo songs?
so where are you, i miss you.
please come save me tonight, come to me soon.



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-02-20 02:19 PM



Welcome to Passions!  Please,
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Karilea
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passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-02-20 03:12 PM


wow! this aches!

Good to have you here! Welcome to Passions!

looking forward to more!

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2003-03-26 04:40 PM


Welcome to Passions!!!!
Nice writing!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
4 posted 2003-03-27 08:40 AM


Kellie - Welcome to PIP!  Lots of good stuff here:

please come save me tonight,

yes I think all of us can relate to this sometimes . . .  keep posting!  xxoo

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-03-27 08:51 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very much enjoyed your first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2003-03-27 12:41 PM


Enjoyed...James
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7 posted 2003-03-28 01:46 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Kellie, this is a very lovely and heartwrenching debut, sweet friend, I wish for this love to come and greet you and forever be the wind beneath your wings, we all share these kinds of feelings, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kellie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kellie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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