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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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~ By Sue ~ You were the love of my life When I became your wife There was so much I felt inside Emotions I could never hide Of myself, I freely gave to you For a while you did that too Then all of a sudden you changed It was my life you had arranged A love I thought would always last Now it is only in the past Your words it seemed were never true How could you do what you did do Dreams of yesterday are all gone But still, I stand up strong With memories of yesterday Of a love that you threw away 2-15-03 |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SmartChick - your yesterdays speak of much wisdom, nice write... BC |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
A sad and courageous poem...nice to hear the healing ending! (big hug for you!) Rf |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
All experinces serve the heart. Thank you for sharing yours...and sharing it so beautifuly. Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think we should not grow our children to believe in the Barbie world where everything is beautiful and perfect and Ken will always be there. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, you wrote this so beautifully, even though it is sad. I'm loving your font style, too...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED  |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
"A love I thought would always last Now it is only in the past Your words it seemed were never true How could you do what you did do" Its too bad that so many things turn out this way. Wonderful write! A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sometimes the memories soften, dear friend, and leave us with determination to make our tomorrows better still...this is poignant, but tender... Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your heart frees itself from sadness through this very enjoyable yet melancholic poem. Margherita |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Amazing how one who is saddened may still pen something so beautiful! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
And it is always them,that lose true love at the end........nice write. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Thank you all for reading and replying. And for your kind comments. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
im so sorry for your loss, but it makes my heart smile to know you've the courage to move on and remain strong. cheers to you. i know this must have been hard to write and even harder to go through. take care amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Well written and heartfelt. Well done! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
Always from your heart. Very nice! ~A~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sue, this write is so full of strength and wisdom. Very empowering and with a sense of closure. Your perspective seems to be very proper! Warm hugs and big smiles, Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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