Open Poetry #25 |
Silence of the Dunes |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Above, darkened skies shattered by millions of stars as a breeze lightly rustles red, white and blue... Sentries abounding, vigilant... waiting, wondering, never knowing if peril watches from beyond a dune. Waves gently lap a sandy shore as gulls cry, crabs scurry and countless small fish swim in endless clouds.. Peaceful, waiting for an eagle to fly, soar the night air. Calm... A lull before a storm comes to this quiet land. In the distance, a baby cries as a mother calms it. Hunger knows no hour, only the need. Freedom knows no hour, nor does the quest to retain what has been so gallantly won... God Speed! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well written piece dear Magnus. May God watch over all of us, all the world over in this tense and turbulent time. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Yes... Said with eloquence my friend. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Magnus...you have been silent so long, but speak when we most need to hear the voice of those, who know... God Bless All of Us.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry...you speak for many! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Barry, this was so touching. It makes me have chills, it's so real. Yes, God bless all...... Heart Hugs, Ethel "Love makes the world go around" |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I can see the sun rising here, so peaceful and bautiful you'd not know there was a problem in all the world. Yes I can hear the news in the next room... all you wrie is so eloquent, so meaningful, so *sigh* ...wonderful write. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry..you always manage to find the words. Well said poet sir. ~Tender smiles and hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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