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Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

0 posted 2003-02-19 10:27 PM

Tight holds the grasp
Upon my heart.
Loosen not but press
Thy lips against it.
For if now is the hour
In which the stars
Might meet their sky,
Let love meet it's moon.

Kingdoms come, but pass
Unlike thy jewels in which
I peer.
Knights fall unto thy feet,
To gain confidence of what alas,
I long to touch.

Death upon my hand mirth,
If the hand that longed
To feel hath not.
But unto death I shall
Happily give if only,
To satisfy my souls ache for thee.
Do I not love thee?

Do I not love thee,
That all that exists
Could be cast away,
And leave two lovers sworn
In bonds of matrimony,
To live alone,
And I shall make thee still.

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-19 11:07 PM

This is romantic and beautiful. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

2 posted 2003-02-19 11:09 PM

Thank you Thank you!!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-02-19 11:35 PM

(smiles) Yay! Oh Albert, may you and your princess forever reside in castles over the rainbows in your dreams come true, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, you have my happy vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank youn for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-02-19 11:38 PM

Albert, I like this. It's a very good submission to the book....

Ethel

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

5 posted 2003-02-20 03:58 AM

wow! you make me believe

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

6 posted 2003-02-20 08:40 AM

Thank you everyone! Wow Passing Shadows. One of the highest compliments I've ever had!
Thank you.

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2003-02-26 07:58 AM

This is a wonderfully romantic piece...

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

8 posted 2003-02-26 08:03 AM

Albert,

Yes, quite romantic and reads so well. I like to hear it read aloud.

Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2003-02-26 08:04 AM

Albert,
Enjoyed the read.

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

10 posted 2003-02-26 08:19 AM

Thank you NAN, PAT and SEYMORE!! I am glad this poem was enjoyed. I too like it better read out loud!!!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

11 posted 2003-02-26 09:31 AM

Ooooh myyyy yessss!!!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

12 posted 2003-02-26 04:27 PM

Thank you Enchantress! I like that response hehehe

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

13 posted 2003-02-26 08:28 PM

Smiling at this, I hear a famous writer's style with this one.
Best when read outloud. But then I suspect that was the intent? Yes, a vote for this one.

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

14 posted 2003-02-26 08:54 PM

Thanks midnite!! Soooooo....which famous poet?

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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Ohio

15 posted 2003-02-26 10:00 PM

old fashioned romance, real nice

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

16 posted 2003-02-26 10:04 PM

Thank you Goddess!! I like old fashioned romance. It isn't like it used to be is it?

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

17 posted 2003-02-28 06:00 AM

Like this...James

carol
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since 2003-01-25

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Florida USA

18 posted 2003-04-17 11:29 PM

Very nice

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

jaysh
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since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

19 posted 2003-04-18 12:48 PM

wow great poem, so full of love, I like it alot, keep up the great writing and keep at it because I look forward to hearing more from you.

Mon Cherie

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since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

20 posted 2003-05-04 10:12 AM

Albert, this is so sweet!! Heh, your style of writing here seems almost Shakespeare-like. Reminds me of past literature lessons.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

21 posted 2003-05-04 12:50 PM

Thank you mon Cherie....
:-)

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