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Life Lessons (5000) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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~*Life Lessons~* I don’t seem to be able to express all of these feelings that I have inside and there’s no way that I can ever count the many sorrowed tears that I have cried. I can’t tell of each battle that I’ve fought only that I have managed to survive, or of the times I’ve been broken hearted but yet, I am still very much alive. There have been many roads that I’ve traveled and many obstacles I have climbed. I have been held in the eye of the storm each receded with the passing of time. At times I have stood closely near the edge and faced the gripping fear of falling down, but when my eyes have finally opened I was still standing firm on solid ground. I have lived within a mighty fortress of solid ice that surrounded my heart and I’ve picked up each one of the pieces after its been shattered and torn apart. I have made journeys throughout the darkness in search of finding the eternal light and I have clung closely to my visions so I don’t lose all that’s held in my sight. It has been only by the grace of God that I have been able to make it through and I am sure that he has carried me in times when I didn’t know what to do. Throughout the many lessons of my life I have gained strength, learning how to overcome and even if I feel a little weak I refuse to come totally undone. If it should but happen that this vessel crashes hard upon rough and rocky shores with time I’ll patch up all of the damage and I will continue sailing once more. ©Dmsmith Feb 14, 2003 I must have had my momma's will and Gods Amazing Grace... I'm a survivor.... (Reba) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (02-15-2003 08:59 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know, my dear, you have graced our pages for some two years now, you have shared with us your gentle spirit, your life's lessons, and always, always, I see abundant hope beneath your wings... guide us always with your most gentle of ways, with your indomitable spirit... and I shall look forward to your next 5,000 posts.... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-15-2003 12:34 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kari if you were to visit my home you would see a plaque that I choose to live by. It simply says that where love and peace and hope abide surely angels dwell inside....well I dont know about the angels part, but I do believe that these things will always abide in my home and heart. I can only hope that I will ever be able to make another 5000 and that these wings continue to find the strength they need to lift them through the hardest of days. Thanks lady.. I must have had my momma's will and Gods Amazing Grace... I'm a survivor.... (Reba) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (02-15-2003 08:57 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit To that I can only say AMEN. A wonderful write.  |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
~Congratulations~ A very uplifting poem full of hope and Grace. Enjoyed greatly. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very, very beautiful...and written with the gentle spirit than only you can, Donna. I have loved to read your poetry and your gentle replies since I've been here. Congratulations on your 5000 and I hope to read much more of you.....  "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-15-2003 03:35 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It has been only by the grace of God that I have been able to make it through and I am sure that he has carried me in times when I didn’t know what to do. Throughout the many lessons of my life I have gained strength, learning how to overcome and even if I feel a little weak I refuse to come totally undone. If it should but happen that this vessel crashes hard upon rough and rocky shores with time I’ll patch up all of the damage and I will continue sailing once more. ===================================== You are much stronger than you know....and much wiser..and a lovely, kind, generous hearted woman who warms us with her light and "gentle spirit" and her gift of rhyme. A beautiful poem to represent you..a signature write of your spirit and faith. Congrats on your milestone Donna... thank you for the many wonderful replies and support of my work that make up some of that number. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Donna...you have chosen the perfect pen name.. and this poem says it all.. Therefore I vote to have it in the book. What a truly 'gentle' spirit' you are! Congratulations on your 5000th Post!! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
These lessons are often ones we learn from. And, they make us a whole lot stronger. This is just beautiful, Donna. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - your inner strength is strong with life, best to you... BC |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"and I am sure that he has carried me in times when I didn’t know what to do" ...truer words were never spoken! This is such an inspirational poem - thanks for sharing! Rf |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
This is a very good poem, passionately dark and intense, reminds me of some of my hidden work that is of a similar matter, very good stuff |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Donna, congrats on your 5000th!  by the grace of God...wow...I suppose we can do anything with that love the ending of this write, a beautifully strong thought |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Donna, oh yeah, i would love to read this in the book...Happy 5000th! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Donna, I think it is life itself that has truly earned you your name, as you are indeed one very gentle spirit. To weather storms of life seems to make us stronger, wiser, and more receptive to the feelings of others as well as ourself. On this occasion of your milestone 5,000th post, let me tell you that I am honored to call you friend, and look forward to 5,000 more of your wonderfully inspiring poems. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (BIG ANGEL HUGS) Oh Donna, God Bless You, we all love you so much and deep down I know your name matches exactly who you are, a comforting, compassionate golden-hearted friend who brings lightn and love to so many of us! (kiss on cheek) This is the perfect poem to commemorate your new Ascendant status, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
Kudos on the Big 5000! And even more kudos on awesome write! It was really wonderful. A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hiya hon.....what a lesson....life that is huh?? you are amazing......you know I love your words.....HUGSSSSSS you.....heres to life.....  sister....Lauren~ I sing to life |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sey, well thank you for the Amen! lol.. I am glad you stopped by and that you enjoyed. Hugs. Pat thank you very much for the congrads. I do appreciate it much. Ethel as I also enjoy your words and thank you for sharing them with us here at Passions. Thanks much. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Janet my friend you are way to kind with your words dear....It has been my pleasure to read your poetry and offer my support as it is so very deserved of such a sweet lady. I only hope that I can continue bringing something worth reading to the folks here at Passions. Hugs. Thank you. Nancy, some might argue that I'm not so gentle, but I do thank you for that. I believe its all in trying to stay focused on the important things in life and not the posessions one has. It's in the heart!! You are a treasureand I thank you for your support and friendship. Sue each thing that we endure makes us just a little bit stronget throughout time. Thank you and may your world be a happy one! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bill I thank you and I appreciate your romantic poetry and your friendship. Hugs. Rf I am glad that you found some inspiration in these words and that you enjoyed. Thank you for taking the time to read.... Peter thank you for stopping in and leaving your thoughts. I do appreciate it. Pleased to see you here at Passions. Dixie my friend, yes by the grace of God surely....... When all else has failed in my life the one thing I cling to is hope.... Thanks for your support doll. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kaile, thank you so much for that! That was sweet and I do appreciate that. Hugs. Sharon you sweet dear lady you........that is one of the nicest things anyone has ever said to me and I will cherish that always as I do your friendship.....you are very special to me. Hugs hon. Noah, you are always my constant buddie who can make me smile. I thank you and appreciate you and your positive outlook and you know I wish nothing but the best for you always....HUGS |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sellout, thanks for the kudos! Much appreciate your comments and time. L~ my friend, to and miss you much.Always for your support and friendship....... my thanks...... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Donna~ A beautiful poem you have shared with us. Your strength and courage are so evident in these lovely words. May your angels always watch over you and give you strength...Paul Congratulatoins on 5,000 Gentle One "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (02-16-2003 08:10 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hello Donna, just as Paul relates, your strength and couage permiate the poem...may you post another 5000 and even more!...peace, health and happiness... Martin |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fabulous...James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna--Beautiful inside and out, you and this poem!  |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Very cool poem.. Thanks for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Paul that is so very kind of you and I do appreciate those thoughts. Sometimes it is hard to continue trying to be strong. Martin, thanks alot. I believe that sometimes others can see more in us than we can see in ourselves. I appreciate the read. James thank you for the fabulous!! Ah Marti, your making me blush......you are so kind Thank you so much for your friendship and support in this trying time. Hugs.Connel , thanks much for that. I must have had my momma's will |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Your name says it all..you have a gentle spirit. This is lovely!  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
PDV, thank you very much for the kind words and I do appreciate your taking the time to read. Hugs. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, GS... I thank you for sharing your lessons... and congratulate you on the milestone! *S* |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Gentle as your nick suggested, Superior like your nick "Gentle Spirit" You have my vote. ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Donna, this post is so soft and mellow as so many of your poems are, but it has a core of inner strength that reflects the poet's faith. Well done! It reminds me of the song, "this little light of mine. I'm gonna let it shine. Thank you. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Congrats with 5000.....and you celebrate it with a wonderful gem...enjoyed it very much Charisma |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Gentle Spirit~ What a beautiful write as well as a beautiful piece of your heart.  Wonderfully penned. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Gentle Spirit such a gentle write as is your heart. Very enjoyed. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very beautifully done... gently beautiful... regards, sudhir |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Perfectly titled this was.....you wrote on the dot of what each and everyone of us goes through in our own individual lives..... ~There have been many roads that I’ve traveled and many obstacles I have climbed. I have been held in the eye of the storm each receded with the passing of time.~ A little reminder that we are very much alike.... BEAUTIFUL!!!!! Bridgette |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
standing firm on solid ground... sometimes hard to do. *s M |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Donna...as gentle as the spirit of you... Well done.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I wanted to take a minute to thank everyone and to apologize for my recent absence. I have not been feeling well and have fallen behind in my replies here. I am so very grateful for the friendships found here through passions, and for the wonderful comments that you all have left. Wow, I am a bit overwhelmed and just wish I were up to replying to you each individually, but I promise to make it up to everyone when I am feeling more up to par. Everyone take care and keep writing. Peace to poetry land. ~D~ I must have had my momma's will and Gods Amazing Grace... I'm a survivor.... (Reba) You do what you do and you pay for your sins and there is no such thing as what might have been... that's a waste of time...drive a man out of his mind....(Tim McGraw) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (02-25-2003 09:01 AM).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Excellent poem! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'd say that angels surely dwell within...  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ 'I have made journeys throughout the darkness in search of finding the eternal light and I have clung closely to my visions so I don’t lose all that’s held in my sight.' And ... you do it so well, lady~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you everyone, very much. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
If it should but happen that this vessel crashes hard upon rough and rocky shores with time I’ll patch up all of the damage and I will continue sailing once more. I keep coming back to read this. This describes you so well Donna. You always pick yourself up with grace. May the oceans of your life be calm and tranquil. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is such a beautiful poem thanks for sharing. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
So much beauty in what you write thank you for the chances we have to enjoy your talent Thomas |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This struck a strident chord in my heart. Your indominatable spirit will always rise again. You are a phoenix but one that truly has a gentle spirit. Beautiful poem from the heart of a beautiful soul. ~ May there be no mountain too high for you to climb, nor any sea too wide for you to cross... Warm loving hugs, Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Again, my deepest thanks and gratitude for all of your gracious replies and the support you all have given me. Thanks and hugs. I must have had my momma's will |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
Wow Donna, I almost missed this. What a wonderful write full of strength. I vote! |
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