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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-02-19 04:49 PM

I would
If I say I love you
Would you love me?
If I would say
How much I love you
would do anything for you
In this world
Let the stars shIne
Above
Because I would love you
more than you know
I would take you
In my arms
And never let you go
I would give these arms of mine
To love you
Dark clouds above the sky
I would say
I love you
When you would be mine
forever
I would go any where
In this world and
Be there with you
All the time
I would make you smile
When I say these words to you
I would take you
In my arms
Keep you warm and tender
I would say I do
And care for you
I would take your heart away
If I love you
If I would say this to you
If I would let
you see there Is love
In my heart that cares

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-02-19 04:51 PM

YES!!!

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2003-02-19 05:11 PM

Let the stars shIne
Above
Because I would love you
more than you know
I would take you
In my arms
And never let you go
I would give these arms of mine
To love you
Dark clouds above the sky
I would say
I love you
When you would be mine
forever
===========================

Vandana...how could anyone turn down such a lovely offer.
heart on sleeve sincerity

" ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ...
if it finds you worthy ... it then directs your course."

K.Gibran

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-02-19 05:53 PM

vandana
Enjoyed the read.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2003-02-19 06:12 PM

Love is such a wonderful feeling....enjoyed it a lot

Charisma

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-02-19 06:15 PM

This is so warm and loving.

Warm hugs,
EA

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

6 posted 2003-02-19 06:38 PM

this sounds like it should be the lyrics for a song... and it makes its own tune, beautiful!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-02-19 07:44 PM

(smiles) Oh Vandana, this is lovely, sweet friend, we all know you would and it WILL happen for you! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-02-20 04:13 AM

enjoyed

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2003-03-09 07:12 PM

"If I would let
you see there Is love
In my heart" ...that's all one can do
*s nicely put
M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-03-10 02:12 AM

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2003-03-10 01:04 PM

There is an irresistible shyness in this romantic and beautiful poem.
Time to change "I would" into "I will" .... and the ONE will be yours ....
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2003-03-10 03:47 PM

Enjoyed...James

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2003-03-18 01:27 PM

Beautiful write, vandana... hope the answer is everything you've dreamed of. *S*

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

14 posted 2003-03-18 05:06 PM

A lovely write.

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

15 posted 2003-03-30 06:12 PM

Ah - If only those woulds were shoulds and dids.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

16 posted 2003-03-30 06:42 PM

VanDana~
Oh ..... so sweetly you pen~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

17 posted 2003-04-04 02:38 PM

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

18 posted 2003-04-04 11:06 PM

So very giving and sweet, Vandana

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

19 posted 2003-04-04 11:52 PM

Enjoyable indeed.

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

20 posted 2003-05-09 07:55 PM

Most marvelous expressions of Love and Devotion shared here. I enjoyed the compassion of your poem very very much. Good job.

-Bob

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