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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
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New York

0 posted 2003-04-13 07:12 AM


Don't cry for me,
let go of the chains he ties you down with.
I care for you so much,
why have we grown apart?

Don't let him walk all over you,
it isn't love I see.
Bashing in on you,
words hurt so much more than stones.

This guilt I hold on to,
for I left you in the cold,
forgot about you
But I'm willing to reconcile this friendship.

Just stop letting him walk all over you,
I see the pain in your eyes.
The stress in your heart,
tell him hun to get lost!

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

© Copyright 2003 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2003-04-13 07:26 AM



Kellie~
You've done a nice job of expressing the thoughts
and feelings of a concerned friend.
The best thing you can do is to just be there for her,
unconditionally, no matter what the outcome.
I hope it all works out well.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (04-13-2003 07:26 AM).]

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-04-13 09:29 AM


you are a true friend to this suffering soul
Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2003-04-13 09:47 AM


Your friend is so very lucky to have your support, Kellie.  Sometimes we have to show our friendship by just being there, and it comes through in this piece. Appreciated this write very much.

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
4 posted 2003-07-13 04:00 AM


I just wish I was lucky enough to have her allow me to help her. But she needs to help herself all I can do is lend an ear and a hug.
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