Open Poetry #25 |
Reaching for the Sun |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
A special Thank you to Auguste for letting me use his beautiful sun photo for my artwork! In the dark of night within our souls Where lonely thoughts are hiding There also waits a brighter place With strength and peace presiding... At times it seems much easier To stumble in the dark Then to step into the daylight And attempt to make our mark... The darkness has it's comfort When we shut the world away An escape from imperfections That are clear in light of day... But were we really meant to hide in solitude and black? Or were we meant to meet head on Our battles, and fight back? To those who chance the latter course Great victory can be won Our obstacles seem smaller While we're reaching for the sun... Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, keep reaching for the sun and you are destined to be showered in nothing but sunbeams and prisms, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is true wisdom, sweet friend, I send many sunny angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You had to know that this would speak to me, dear friend! I love this poem...everything about it! huggums, Linda xo |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sunnyone~ Very positive and up lifting. Thanks for sharing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The darkness has it's comfort When we shut the world away An escape from imperfections That are clear in light of day... But were we really meant to hide in solitude and black? Or were we meant to meet head on Our battles, and fight back? Timing is everything, and I really needed to read this tonight. Thank you Sunnyone~ You rhyme so well but it's the meaning in your words that flow. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Very nice Sunny - you know I can always coun ton a smile when I click you on thank you xxoo |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi James, and I bet you see lots of beautiful sunsets and rises in Hawaii!! Thank you!! Hi Noah, and all your angel hugs made it safely to me across the big pond!! Thank you!! Hi Linda, and yes, I thought of you...we are sisters of the sun!! Thank you!! Hi Paul, and just to write out thoughts that I hold dear gave me some uplifting moments...thank you so much! Hi BluesSerenad, and if this poem gave you what you needed, then I am very happy indeed! After all, as poets, we are always hoping to send out a message that is worthy! Thank you!! Hi littlewing, and I'm so glad to know that I can make you smile!! If writers could put smiles on the faces of the world, how wonderful that would be!!!! Thank you! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny: Very inspirational piece. I love it and you certainly know how to write poetry. Thank you for sharing this with all of us. A |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Into my library with this bright shiny piece! Thanks, Sunnyone, for this warm post. |
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