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Passion
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 4

0 posted 2003-04-12 06:55 PM

I don't know if this would really be considered a poem or not, but it sorta gives some interesting outlooks on life. This is written in the eyes of a 13 year old girl mind you.

It's All Relative!
None of today will matter, because there's always tomorrow.
None of this childhood will matter, 'cause we're all gonna grow up and get a job and go bald.
None of this lifetime will matter, 'cause it's smaller than a speck compared to the eternity we will spend in the afterlife.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-04-12 07:03 PM

(smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, this life alone is only a grain of sand in the whole eternity ahead on the horizon, this is a gorgeous debut, may this life bring you many smiles ahead, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Passion, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

2 posted 2003-04-13 03:32 AM

Passion~ You speak very wise words.Enjoyed

Welcome to Passions and our family of friends. I sincerely hope you have an enjoyable stay and look forward to reading more of your poems.

There are many different forums here. I hope you take time to visit them and see what we have to offer.

( Check your E Mail for a special greeting )
Paul Wilson: Moderator/Passions in Poetry

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-04-13 05:53 AM

Enjoyed this very much! Welcome, new Passion's poet. You exhibit much wisdom, for any age.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2003-04-13 05:58 AM

Passion~
Welcome!
I enjoyed this first post of yours.
I'll be watching for more.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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