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Open Poetry #25

Union

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-04-12 06:10 AM

A union created in magic,
Adhesion so unique,
The sweat lasts a lifetime,
Memories so hot,
They still steam within.

So darn hot,
Hot,
Your mind can not
Stop.
Vibration of pleasure,
Never ending.

Try as you must,
You can not now,
Stop.
Walking away
From these words,
The image intertwines.

Some may say
This is vulgar.
But they will always see
Something evil,
For they never sweat
In the open,
Seeing something dirty
In every clean room.

I choose to smile,
Within my own thoughts,
Letting you imagine,
What is within these words,
But the magic created,
Is in the union of thought
Created in you now.

D.Lester Young (04/10/03)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (04-12-2003 06:21 AM).]

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2003-04-12 10:19 AM

Dave,

The very thought of thought makes me smile. Intriguing...

Hope you are doing okay...

Enjoyed,
Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2003-04-13 09:17 AM

Ah.....this has a hidden message, and I enjoy the way you put it together!! Great one, and great thoughts!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

3 posted 2003-04-21 11:33 PM

This is very good poetry it gets my vote

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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