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Open Poetry #25

Innocence

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-04-12 04:24 AM

Pretending im patient
pretending
the essence of this love
is waiting
the longer it takes
the better it'll be
ask me if i wanna sit back
and dream
dreams aren't real
being with you is real
hate to love
but longing to feel
a touch
catch a stare
brush agaisnt you
walking by
dont look away
when i make eye contact
dont say goodbye
if we dont have to

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-04-12 04:53 AM

Goodness you are bleeding here:

dreams aren't real
being with you is real
hate to love
but longing to feel

hate to love yet love to feel . . .
EXACTLY = nice write xxoo

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2003-04-13 09:20 AM

Sometimes it is the innocence in love that is so compelling...really enjoyed reading this one, and I hope to read many more, as I like your style!!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

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