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scorpio
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0 posted 2003-04-11 09:07 AM



Lipstick

With freshly applied red lipstick
She tenderly reaches out for me
And softly leaves her mark.

believe in what your heart feels...

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-04-11 09:21 AM


Oooh Scorpio..there is SO much here I could say..
But this early in the day...I shall behave.
Very nicely written in twenty or less, poet sir.
Much enjoyed this ayem.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-04-11 11:02 AM


Mwaaaaah!  There's another one--in fun-lovin' fuscia!



EA

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3 posted 2003-04-11 11:15 AM



Right.....there.
Ah....
good, soft, sensuous...quiet.

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4 posted 2003-04-11 01:21 PM


Oh my scorpio.....how did I miss this. Very nice indeed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-04-11 01:24 PM


Scorpio, this is very good....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-04-11 01:27 PM


Scorpio,
Don't need the kiss but enjoyed the write.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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7 posted 2003-04-11 01:37 PM


FABULOUS!!!!!

Hugs and kisses and peace, Marti

scorpio
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8 posted 2003-04-11 02:24 PM


I can imagine just what you left unsaid Enchantress...perhaps I should have posted this evening..

Fushia red...vivid Linda..

Karilea...yes all of the above...thank you..

Thank you for your kind comments Chris..

Thank you Ethel...I appreciate your support..

I understand about the kiss Sy...really I do..

Most generous of you Marti...thank you..

believe in what your heart feels...

1slick_lady
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9 posted 2003-04-11 04:51 PM


i have always found that less words are much better when kissing...h
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2003-04-11 05:24 PM


Actually I like them to put on fresh lipstick after the kissing is done.
When they put it on before the kissing begins they might say something silly like "I don't want to mess up my lipstick."  James

scorpio
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11 posted 2003-04-13 04:30 PM


Yes 1slicklady..the fewer the words the better..

I agree James...I've heard that excuse too..

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