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Open Poetry #25

Looking thru her window

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

0 posted 2003-04-11 12:47 PM

she longs to feel
the pouring rain,

in its deluge,

release her pain,

in open view
of sky and air,

a single tear,

upon her face,

in stately grace,

she casts
this trace,

the last,
of him,

on whim,

then trades,

her fear,
to wear,

a first of season,
flower,

near,

her heart,
so dear,

and sees
the moment

ever clear,

his love
was never
truly there

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-04-11 01:19 AM

seems as a bit of the ink has rubbed off on you BB . . . nice write and sorry it had to be written . . . xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (04-11-2003 01:20 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-04-11 02:02 AM

that's sad

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