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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Breathe I tell myself you're almost there just a few more minutes please legs don't fail me easy does it relax a bit not so tense Breathe head spinning ears ringing heart pounding eyes fixed upon beauty Hey! He's talking to you! I DO! "You may kiss the bride" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh, cute write..much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You captured the moment well! A little bit of the bubbly to calm your nerves maybe! Fun poem Edder, cheers! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ahh, yes, the wedding jitters. Well done Edder!! Enjoyed. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- that perches in the soul.... -Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by Nightshade (04-10-2003 10:58 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Edder - this IS awesome! Well put - great job hehehe . . . xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I almost stopped breathing... very cute write! |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
Beautiful poem. Very creative :-) |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
EDDLES!!!!!!!!!! I'm glad you decided to join up!!!!!!! ~hugs~ I loved this, as I always love your work ~biiiiiig hugs~ Can't wait to see what else you put up! ^-^!!!! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Golly gee! I certainly knew what it felt like to be a bride at the altar, now I know what it feels like to be a groom!--and they are the same feelings! Love & Light, EA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A delightful capture of a moment in time! Well done! |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Nancy- thank you glad you enjoyed Blues- thanks...the bubbly also put me in the mood to write it!  Chris- thanks for reading littlewing- thank you so much. you're much too kind passing shadows- thank you lost_star thanks KoKo- Lauren!! ~Huggles~ thanks for showing me this wonderful place! Earth Angel- we are more alike than you know! glad you enjoyed Sunshine- glad you thought so. i welcome your opinion on all my writing |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling at this one. For a minute, I thought you were running in the Boston Marathon! congratulations on experiencing breathlessness |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
LOL at Kacy's reply. I don't know about the big race, but I did think you were running and getting out of breath. HaHa!! You captured the moment just right!!  Hugs, Ethel |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Kacy- thanks a bunch Ethel- thanks for the read. i'm gald you enjoyed it. i was in a light-hearted mood and had alot of fun with it. |
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