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The Painter Man's Watch
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The Painter Man's Watch |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Sometimes the sky fills the skin like ground of leaves pungent memories and song just love her into ear dear lips then sing me into light cannot touch the fragile skin so loved with tender enough delight Wrapped then in painter man's watch the corner of his eye delight the caress a must of spring and all all like open doors and summer more and more it seems this spring brings lift and pinch back flower to laying back in bower’s long forgotten dream So catch me now you can this up me fill like buttercup of old gone splendid sudden young and even turning down the day a bold blue moves me in just right way and all the pretty pieces rock me until the fragile glass melts into stay [This message has been edited by Martie (04-10-2003 12:40 AM).] |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
There's love in this, and more -- everything left to the imagination, and nothing, in this interlude. Once again, Martie works her magic, and brings us along for the ride. Thank you for sharing. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Martie - you are a master poet my friend... BC |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, this is so beautiful. You, my friend, are a painter..... a painter of words.  Heart Hugs,  Ethel |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
martie- This is yet another masterpiece. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Martie, my friend, from ------------ Sometimes the sky fills the skin like ground of leaves pungent memories ... ... to ... this spring brings lift and pinch back flower to laying back in bower’s long forgotten dream ... ... to ... a bold blue moves me in just right way and all the pretty pieces rock me until the fragile glass melts into stay -------------------- this is a most marvelous write... thanks for sharing Regards, Sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This repetitious delight just lifts you up - better'n helium! Indeed, the catch up of the day, Martie...thanks for giving me my morning reason to smile... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So catch me now you can this up me fill like buttercup of old gone splendid sudden young and even turning down the day a bold blue moves me in just right way and all the pretty pieces rock me until the fragile glass melts into stay ========================== that verse ALONE is poectic GOLD ... all I could do is smile when reading this gem of pen. like buttercup of old gone splendid sudden young and its lines like that one, that is pure Martie poetry on high and the rest of us can only take delight in your flight. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so beautiful Martie! I especially love the last stanza.. made me feel like running outside barefoot twiling and twiling myself into a Spring dither. Love this!! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful and uplifting poem Martie.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ This is just so YOU ... in bold blue~ You are just sooooooo *huggable*~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Martie, this has a good feel...a nice groove - well written. Rf |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - we read and read and never find all the magic you bring in your wonderful words - this is just great - Paul |
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