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Open Poetry #25

Black Dress Fairy Tale

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-04-09 07:24 PM

Black Dress Fairy Tale

As I walked and waited in the hall,
I put my head down to stairs.
Then I gazed at the black shoes of yours.
From dress to waist, waist to top,
You had dressed in mysterious black,
Just like your black pearls eyes,
Always shining like the benign moon.

I heard you said your belly grown an inch,
Yet all I saw was perfect shape
Of a black delicate vase.
All the time we were so quiet,
As though wind had stopped
And cars' engines were off,
Waiting for us to begin to dance...

All was in a dream fairy tale,
I longed for conversation with you,
Yet tonight I couldn't utter
A single word, just like your breath
Seemed like nonexistent-
Never ever had been so closed
To observe your fine eyes.

(c)April 9, 2003

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

1 posted 2003-04-10 06:15 AM

a good tale of being speechless and savouring the moment...i enjoyed

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

2 posted 2003-04-10 06:29 AM

very nice! i rather enjoyed it!

i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave!

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

3 posted 2003-04-10 01:34 PM

thanks you for the comments from both of you

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

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