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Strangers Angels |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Grains of our lives fall in sweet slumber like a cool spring shower . . . My hands bathed in blood and sweat Sands of time cling to every line within these hands of mine they hold your heart eternal I looked into your eyes and cried . . . Run away with me just for a spell It will be our eternity Take my hand I will lead you to Heaven [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-04-2003 04:20 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Listening to Just Like Heaven, are we?  |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I didn't connect the first three lines to the rest of your poem, Sue, but you may have my hand. :-) Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
 Beautiful poem I enjoyed the flow of the words Thomas |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue..this is exquisite. Beautiful...just beautiful... ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...your words speak of the promise of untold beauty. Eric |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful, just like someone I know |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Bravo! nicely done. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very, very nice - enjoyed! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
James - thank you Ken - so very sweet . . . TY Mikey - hehehehe - you caught me . . . thank you Nancy - you are so very sweet TY Ericc - much too good to me . . . TY vandana & Dixie - always soooo good to see you guys reading me - thank you ! Raph - THANK YOU sweety xxoo Edder & Night - thank you so much Thanks guys xxoo |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
hand extended warmly littlewing |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Loved this! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There is at least one Angel here that I know ... this is a very very touching poem. Love, Margherita |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Run away with me just for a spell It will be our eternity ' Love the use of the word 'spell' here. Perfect.  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A cry for a respite, eternal?...Or just a break from it all. This is a beauty. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I always love your beautiful romantic sentiments and may your love always make you feel heavenly, yay, this is enlightening, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - read this poem and hit the road, i'm just passing through St. Louis. See ya in a few hours. Heaven, here I come... BC |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
enjoyed the read, my friend, especially "Run away with me just for a spell It will be our eternity" jwesley |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Love this, Sue..beautifully penned. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
dream - so very sweet TY Thank you Brad Margherita - goodness go look in the mirror for you will see another one . . . TY Duncan - thank you - didnt even see that part . . . Ed - yes both indeed . . . Noah - thank you - me too Bill - hahahahahaha - I am a day or so late . . . . loved your response - *smiles* thank you j - thank you so much! Vicky - thank you so very much Thanks guys xxoo |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
sue ya make me smile! i've missed reading you. beautiful! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks gemma - where have you been missy? Miss you too . . . xxoo |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I looked into your eyes and cried ... We should all have this one love. Great job When the morning cries and you don't know why... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, look here what I almost missed. Friend, this is a gem that belongs in a  Heart Hugs to you, Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ringo - thank you - wish I had that love . . Ethel - you are much too sweet to me thank you xxoo |
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