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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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This anger amuses you wind me tight and release my laughter kidnapping yours. Take me where you wander in dark alleys of introspection. Decay all callous hands diseases scratch a smile upon my knee bathe with care in puddle of precaution whilst spider legged you walk my walls. Fight-flight mechanism out of order I am home in this juggle of us. You the clown, and I, the child. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Interesting use of words....Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I am home in this juggle of us. You the clown, and I, the child. Biting words, hope your computer's up and running again [This message has been edited by Aenimal (04-09-2003 11:35 PM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Gemma  Is your computer working? I hope so. I'm missing you around here.  I really liked this poem. I liked "You the clown, and I, the child". Heart Hugs,  Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gemma - get back in here missy - quick! loved this because I know it: Fight-flight mechanism out of order I am home in this juggle of us. craziness . . . awesome write here xxoo |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Full of creative turns and beautiful phrases. Eric |
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