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redheart angrybraids
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0 posted 2003-04-09 08:08 AM



i am quick hewed
tranquil blue
dangled in the morning dew

burnt black
back tracked
causing wild horses
to act up

healing in my red
garden shoes
calming dying roses

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


© Copyright 2003 Amelia A. Ensign - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-04-09 08:20 AM


redheart,
A delightful read, enjoyed.

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-04-09 09:13 AM


"healing in my red
garden shoes
calming dying roses"


I have missed reading you!!
Wonderful use of color here.
Very much enjoyed...Hugs, Nancy.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-04-09 09:17 AM


..."quick blue dangled in the morning dew" ~ I especially enjoyed this wonderful line!

Sending love and all the colors of the rainbow,
Earth Angel

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2003-04-09 09:32 AM


RedHeartAngryBraids~
It is always a pure pleasure to read your poetic thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2003-04-09 09:33 AM


Now, I love this. It's so cute.
I was going to pick out a favorite line,
but I like them all.....

Hugs,
Ethel

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6 posted 2003-04-09 10:12 AM


I always just wanna tackle you with HUGS!

OH----I can't wait to show you off!

"calming dying roses"

Indeed, my lovely sweet friend.

you have that gift.



SO happy to see you!

much...



Quick YOU, one for the book? yes please? huh huh? c'mon.....


Sudhir Iyer
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7 posted 2003-04-09 12:15 PM


ahhhhh....
the colours ------- beautiful
the thoughts ------ exceptional...

you ------- amazing...
this ------ great write...

regards,
sudhir

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8 posted 2003-04-09 12:22 PM


Oh my !! This is perfect and going directly into my library! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Krystopher Morris
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9 posted 2003-04-09 12:27 PM


Never thought basic colors could give such powerful imagery! Thanks for sharing!

Poetry is love and love is life.

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Gaia
10 posted 2003-04-09 03:24 PM



SHEESH! what incredible imagery here.
I can really see you dangling in the dew.


PS you stay away from us too long!

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (04-09-2003 03:25 PM).]

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11 posted 2003-04-09 03:46 PM


I simply find how you put your thoughts into poetry amazing!

Don't be too hard on yourself, even Einstein
had trouble tying his shoelaces.

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2003-04-09 04:19 PM


Enjoyed..James
Martie
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13 posted 2003-04-09 09:41 PM


redheart......

healing in my red
garden shoes
calming dying roses

I can picture this!

wranx
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14 posted 2003-04-09 10:14 PM


I see you wear them all....wear them well
kaile
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15 posted 2003-04-10 05:55 AM


welcome back! and i dig the quaintness your words bring me as usual...
winston
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16 posted 2003-04-10 06:01 AM


a great write for a self-proclaimed 'awful speller'.

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littlewing
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17 posted 2003-04-10 06:50 AM


Amelia - this IS brilliant

burnt black
back tracked
causing wild horses
to act up

*grin*
amazing xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (04-10-2003 06:51 AM).]

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