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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-04-08 07:30 PM

And the day calls
to you of hidden
things.

The night...sings you
soft through sweetened
dreams.

And within the shared space
hushed between the
passing two -
Both sun and moon
pause
and linger just a moment
longer:

Perhaps
with hopeful dreams of
one last glance -
From you.

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

1 posted 2003-04-08 07:33 PM

with hopeful dreams of
one last glance -
From you.

I especially liked this part - nice write

[This message has been edited by dreambuilder (04-08-2003 07:43 PM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-04-08 08:53 PM

Eric~
This is beautiful !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-04-09 03:28 AM

Ericc - I loved this:

And within the shared space
hushed between the
passing two -
Both sun and moon

beautiful xxoo

Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
Member

since 2000-02-12

Posts 197
Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.

4 posted 2003-04-10 01:11 AM

I am always pleased to come upon another helpless romantic. I say this about very few things but: 'I wish I had written this'.

The noblest battles are always fought in vain
-Cyrano de Bergerac

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

5 posted 2003-04-10 01:19 AM

Being too cynical to write like this, I have to get my fix elsewhere.., your writing has got me good for the next week. Outstanding job.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-04-10 01:21 AM

Ericc, I alwyas love to read
your beautiful romantic poems,

Hugs,
Ethel

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2003-04-10 08:03 AM

The night...sings you
soft through sweetened
dreams.

... and you wonderful Poet you sing us soft through sweetened DAYS ...

Love, Margherita

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-04-10 08:51 AM

"Both sun and moon
pause
and linger just a moment
longer:

Perhaps
with hopeful dreams of
one last glance -
From you"

I especially love the lines above Eric!
Beautiful indeed.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

9 posted 2003-04-10 09:08 AM

/what can I say that I haven't said before?

Lovely!

Sunkissed.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2003-04-10 11:39 AM

That's because
the Sun
and the Moon
understand...

Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

11 posted 2003-04-10 11:46 AM

ericc,

such a lovely poem! really beautiful.
so glad i got the chance to read this.
take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2003-04-10 12:13 PM

enjoyed

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

13 posted 2003-04-10 07:17 PM

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

14 posted 2003-04-10 07:23 PM

I LOVE this Ericc.
Sandra

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