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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-04-08 01:52 PM

Cup of hand,
Bit of fluff…
Twig gone bent with
Fall to earth,

Cupping feathers,
How warm is this bird?
Somewhere, where some mother
Mourns

And a child of three
Cries…

Cup of hand
Bit of fluff,
Only thought is what life unfolds within
Sing
Hold on, only hold on to life,
And live in song
Live in song

When before, all beseech was
Id, now pass ego on the fly
Ask not what will you do for me,
Go directly to

Cup of hand
Bit of fluff
Twig gone bent with
Fall to earth,

Daddy, daddy, tell me how
To make it better ~
Save the song!

Let this angel fly.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2003-04-08 02:06 PM

When before, all beseech was
Id, now pass ego on the fly
Ask not what will you do for me,
Go directly to

Cup of hand
Bit of fluff
Twig gone bent with
Fall to earth,

Daddy, daddy, tell me how
To make it better ~
Save the song!

Let this angel fly.

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Lord knows your words have wings....

( lovely lovely lovely wings )

"and when we get to the pearly gates ...
we'll find what we called our sins were just mistakes."

Tom Kimmel

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

2 posted 2003-04-08 02:09 PM

wow! reading again and again. sinking in but not digested...there's so much here, it may never be.

Rf

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-04-08 03:00 PM

As Robert stated...there is so much here...so much!
Excellent write Karilea.
I shall pop this into my library to ponder later
..when it's quieter.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2003-04-08 03:11 PM

Oh you...every TIME. There is something I wrote that I'll have to FIND first to send you.

But?

cup of hand,
bit of fluff--

there's a universe of potential in those lines and you didn't let me down.

Krystopher Morris
Member

since 2002-11-11

Posts 130
Ancient land called Chivalry

5 posted 2003-04-08 03:14 PM

Very Nice, Awsome Imagery.Thanks for sharing!

Poetry is love and love is life.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-04-08 04:28 PM

always enjoy reading your poems

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