Open Poetry #25 |
The Origin of Taps.. |
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It was Harrison's Landing, Virginia in the year of '62 Where the gray of Southern forces battled with the Union blue. For days the soldiers of both sides fought fiercely, hand to hand, To try to gain control of that small, narrow piece of land. The fighting had lulled down a bit on that hot, August night. The soldiers felt exhaustion from this never-ending fight. Captain Robert Ellicombe sat on his cot alone When, from the darkness not too far he heard a soldier moan. His weary eyes looked out and saw a soldier on the ground. Then, once again, he heard a mouth give out that mournful sound. On hands and knees, he crawled the distance to the soldier's side But, by the time he got there, he saw that the soldier died. He lit his lantern, noticed that the uniform was gray. Though Robert was a Union captain, he cried anyway Then shone light on the face of one more youth whose life was done And screamed out in denial as he recognized his son! His son was studying music in the South when war began And joined the Confederate Army, telling no one of his plan. So here they were, one final time - the father and the son, A young Confederate soldier silenced by a Yankee gun. The Captain asked a favor for his son, respectfully, A military funeral, though he was the enemy. He asked a funeral dirge be played by their small bugle corp But the general wouldn't go for that - one bugle, nothing more. He'd found some papers in the pocket of his son that night, Some notes, some words that he had found a little time to write. Those notes were played by that one bugler at the setting sun As father read the words that had been written by his son.... Day is done Gone the sun From the lakes From the hills From the sky All is well Safely rest God is nigh. Fading light Dims the sight And a star Gems the sky Gleaming bright From afar Drawing nigh Falls in night. Thanks and praise For our days Neath the sun Neath the stars Neath the sky As we go This we know God is nigh. For over one hundred forty years that tune still plays for all The men who come to volunteer and answer Freedom's call. It sounds across the land we love each time that day is done.. A tribute from a Yankee soldier to his Rebel son. |
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Waterbirdfly Junior Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 32China |
great!! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
this is a wonderful tribute Balladeer being a Civil War buff myself I just have a little quibble please correct me if wrong because I want to know the truth on this I am interested but I have it that Union General Daniel Butterfield wrote Taps at Harrison's Landing If there is different information I would love to know regardless of who wrote it... this is nicely done and fitting now.....yes? thank you Brian |
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LUV_R_GIRL2379 Junior Member
since 2003-04-09
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awesome write! keep up the good work! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
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Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
wonderfully done, and as I know nothing of the origin of taps you may be right and you maybe wrong, it makes no nevermind to me it was was still poetically correct. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Kit McCallum
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Michael, you tackle such difficult topics with genuine care and integrity ... always with your wonderful cadence-filled flow and poetic charm. This is beautifully written, sweet poet. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
One of the most heartfelt pieces of music - I learned this as a youngster at camp, but always a tug of heart, and a lump in throat was there to inhibit a full voice... I had not known of the origin - but always, if I want to learn something new, I know where to come. Thank you, Sir. Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?... |
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Nan
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"God is nigh" Love you, Deer... |
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regards2you Member Elite
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Posts 3940California |
I so enjoy your story telling, ever heart warming...always heart touching, one way or the other. Adding historical figures and facts just make them that much more enjoyable, yet even without, this story would have been wonderful....such a treat to read you. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
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Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, To me it is the write not the right. You are a gifted writer. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ Thank you ! I've always loved this historical happening~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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Thank you all for the love "taps" ... Brian, thank you for getting be off my duff to dig a little deeper into this event. I find that there seems to be evidence that the General did indeed compose the original version, although at his funeral there was no mention of the song or his part in the creation. There appear to be letters, though, to verify this fact... http://www.west-point.org/taps/Taps.html I sincerely appreciate your pointing this out because I love to learn things, even from my mistakes. I would have written the same poem...I would have just labeled it fiction. Hey, I got the place and time right. Two outta three ain't so bad! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I must have started this day especially blonde... for anyone with any sense would have to guess that a poem with such a title might well start a tear or two trickling. *S* But onward I advanced.... and now have tear splashes on my blouse. *S* This is simply superb, Deer One! |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Fiction or non, this was beautifully written and a joy to read. I found myself so fascinated with the subject matter that I had to keep reminding myself it was a poem, as I was reading it out of meter and more like I'd read a history book, or something... That doesn't mean I didn't enjoy it, far from it... you captured my interest and fully impressed me with this story, Michael... another ballad well done. Parasite God becomes as |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
great piece balladeer, maybe if more history was written like this students wouldn't be falling asleep in class so much. -majnu |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Well now, I was aware of the story but never heard it told so well. The heartache that father felt must have been unbearable. But I like the line: ============================== A tribute from a Yankee soldier to his Rebel son ============================== Awesome... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
You've outdone yourself on this one Mike..well done!!! |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Mike- I, too, have seen this information, yet have NEVER thought of doing this with it. You are a great talent, and this is one of your bests. When the morning cries and you don't know why... |
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Balladeer
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From such poets whose work i admire so much...I thank you all. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
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You ROCK and it rolls me this is cooler than I have words for!!! Somewhere...theres a can of spam with your name on it and some spammy smooches too Ocean wrapped around the sun |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I did not know the origin until today, and sent out a little something to friends another friend had sent me. Larry sent me a link to your poem, which I missed Michael and what a loss it would have been not for me to read it. You took the actual story and "one-upped" it that is for sure in your usually excellent rhyme and cadence. Fantastic!
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Gunslinger Senior Member
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Posts 901TX, USA |
Excellent, Sir 'deer! We will certainly forgive you the small inaccuracy and chalk it up to poetic license. Bravo! |
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