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0 posted 2003-04-12 12:34 PM



It was Harrison's Landing, Virginia in the year of '62
Where the gray of Southern forces battled with the Union blue.
For days the soldiers of both sides fought fiercely, hand to hand,
To try to gain control of that small, narrow piece of land.

The fighting had lulled down a bit on that hot, August night.
The soldiers felt exhaustion from this never-ending fight.
Captain Robert Ellicombe sat on his cot alone
When, from the darkness not too far he heard a soldier moan.

His weary eyes looked out and saw a soldier on the ground.
Then, once again, he heard a mouth give out that mournful sound.
On hands and knees, he crawled the distance to the soldier's side
But, by the time he got there, he saw that the soldier died.

He lit his lantern, noticed that the uniform was gray.
Though Robert was a Union captain, he cried anyway
Then shone light on the face of one more youth whose life was done
And screamed out in denial as he recognized his son!

His son was studying music in the South when war began
And joined the Confederate Army, telling no one of his plan.
So here they were, one final time - the father and the son,
A young Confederate soldier silenced by a Yankee gun.

The Captain asked a favor for his son, respectfully,
A military funeral, though he was the enemy.
He asked a funeral dirge be played by their small bugle corp
But the general wouldn't go for that - one bugle, nothing more.

He'd found some papers in the pocket of his son that night,
Some notes, some words that he had found a little time to write.
Those notes were played by that one bugler at the setting sun
As father read the words that had been written by his son....

Day is done
Gone the sun
From the lakes
From the hills
From the sky
All is well
Safely rest
God is nigh.

Fading light
Dims the sight
And a star
Gems the sky
Gleaming bright
From afar
Drawing nigh
Falls in night.

Thanks and praise
For our days
Neath the sun
Neath the stars
Neath the sky
As we go
This we know
God is nigh.

For over one hundred forty years that tune still plays for all
The men who come to volunteer and answer Freedom's call.
It sounds across the land we love each time that day is done..
A tribute from a Yankee soldier to his Rebel son.


© Copyright 2003 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-12 12:59 PM


great!!
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2 posted 2003-04-12 02:27 AM


this is a wonderful tribute Balladeer

being a Civil War buff myself
I just have a little quibble

please correct me if wrong
because I want to know the truth on this
I am interested

but I have it that Union General
Daniel Butterfield wrote Taps at Harrison's Landing

If there is different information I would love to know

regardless of who wrote it...
this is nicely done
and fitting now.....yes?

thank you
Brian

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3 posted 2003-04-12 02:31 AM


awesome write! keep up the good work!
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4 posted 2003-04-12 03:02 AM


wonderfully done, and as I know nothing of the origin of taps you may be right and you maybe wrong, it makes no nevermind to me it was was still poetically correct.
Kethry

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5 posted 2003-04-12 04:57 AM


Michael, you tackle such difficult topics with genuine care and integrity ... always with your wonderful cadence-filled flow and poetic charm. This is beautifully written, sweet poet.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

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6 posted 2003-04-12 08:42 AM



One of the most heartfelt pieces of music -
I learned this as a youngster at camp,
but always a tug of heart, and a lump in throat
was there to inhibit a full voice...

I had not known of the origin -
but always, if I want to learn something new,
I know where to come.

Thank you, Sir.

          Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

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7 posted 2003-04-12 08:49 AM


"God is nigh"

Love you, Deer...

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8 posted 2003-04-12 11:09 AM




I so enjoy your story telling, ever heart warming...always heart touching, one way or the other. Adding historical figures and facts just make them that much more enjoyable, yet even without, this story would have been wonderful....such a treat to read you.

Hugs, Pat

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9 posted 2003-04-12 12:15 PM


Mike,
To me it is the write not the right.
You are a gifted writer.

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10 posted 2003-04-12 01:01 PM


Balladeer~
Thank you !

I've always loved this historical happening~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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11 posted 2003-04-12 06:07 PM


Thank you all for the love "taps" ...

Brian, thank you for getting be off my duff to dig a little deeper into this event. I find that there seems to be evidence that the General did indeed compose the original version, although at his funeral there was no mention of the song or his part in the creation. There appear to be letters, though, to verify this fact...
http://www.west-point.org/taps/Taps.html

I sincerely appreciate your pointing this out because I love to learn things, even from my mistakes. I would have written the same poem...I would have just labeled it fiction.

Hey, I got the place and time right. Two outta three ain't so bad!


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12 posted 2003-04-14 09:23 AM


I must have started this day especially blonde... for anyone with any sense would have to guess that a poem with such a title might well start a tear or two trickling. *S* But onward I advanced.... and now have tear splashes on my blouse. *S* This is simply superb, Deer One!
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13 posted 2003-04-14 01:55 PM


Fiction or non, this was beautifully written and a joy to read.  I found myself so fascinated with the subject matter that I had to keep reminding myself it was a poem, as I was reading it out of meter and more like I'd read a history book, or something...

That doesn't mean I didn't enjoy it, far from it... you captured my interest and fully impressed me with this story, Michael... another ballad well done.  

Parasite

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we are that we
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14 posted 2003-04-14 03:12 PM


great piece balladeer, maybe if more history was written like this students wouldn't be falling asleep in class so much.

-majnu
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15 posted 2003-04-14 11:09 PM


Well now, I was aware of the story but never heard it told so well. The heartache that father felt must have been unbearable. But I like the line:
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A tribute from a Yankee soldier to his Rebel son
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Awesome...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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16 posted 2003-04-15 11:20 AM


You've outdone yourself on this one Mike..well done!!!
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17 posted 2003-04-15 12:55 PM


Mike- I, too, have seen this information, yet have NEVER thought of doing this with it. You are a great talent, and this is one of your bests.

When the morning cries and you don't know why...

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18 posted 2003-04-15 09:13 PM


From such poets whose work i admire so much...I thank you all.
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19 posted 2003-04-15 09:39 PM


You ROCK and it rolls me
this is cooler than I have words for!!!
Somewhere...theres a can of spam with your name on it

and some spammy smooches too

Ocean wrapped around the sun
Sky fell down & pulled us in
stole away my oxygen
left me breathless in the blue
left me breathless there with you.

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20 posted 2003-04-15 11:04 PM


I did not know the origin until today, and sent out a little something to friends another friend had sent me.  Larry sent me a link to your poem, which I missed Michael and what a loss it would have been not for me to read it.  You took the actual story and "one-upped" it that is for sure in your usually excellent rhyme and cadence.  Fantastic!

    

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21 posted 2003-04-15 11:33 PM


Excellent, Sir 'deer! We will certainly forgive you the small inaccuracy and chalk it up to poetic license.
Bravo!

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