Open Poetry #25 |
A Dying Man's Song |
EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Hey Guys. Just wanted to see if this one holds any chance of being published.. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * The time has come, Oh unseen one, Oh soul of mine I trust. The unseen land past the gate of death awaits you, as I breathe this final breath.. At this moment, I lie in pain, at the end of a life NOT lived in vain! Pondering that which awaits me soon, When this heart beats no more.. I know not fear at this time now, but glorious anticipation. I'm going to soon find out just what exactly is our destination. My dying heart trembles with wonderous delight, I lay in my bed to die tonight. The time has come, Oh unseen one! I think we're going to be alright. I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you. |
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sperarifraai Member
since 2003-03-06
Posts 65Ireland |
Great stuff! Definetly publishing material. Sperari |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Joseph, I think that all type poetry will make it into the book. You wrote this very well, even if it did make me sad.. Hugs, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Joseph, any poem that makes me cry or laugh is one worthy for the book in my point of view, your poetry is always so honest and makes you feel emotions therefore I proudly place my vote for this! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, my prayers are with those needing faith, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joseph, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a worthy choice to reflect your writing in the book...you have my vote and best wishes that it makes it. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If you can evoke that kind of emotion in me--whether it be glad--or sad as this one did--you're right on track! Warm hugs for a heavy heart, EA |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
YES but, I have always enjoyed your writings....enjoyed.... Lauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Eagle - what a nice twist - is lovely - xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-08-2003 03:29 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
My unseen one~ says it all. What a nice take~ I want to go like that~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
enjoyed Charisma |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
This is so sad but very good it got my vote Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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