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Open Poetry #25
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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2003-04-08 05:42 AM


Ripple

on the
surface of
still water
a change
of current
did I
stir you
in a
surprise touch
from small
to deeper
ripple
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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-04-08 07:07 AM

ripples do seem to reach far at times...

nicely done.
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2003-04-08 08:11 AM

beautiful imagery ...
Love, Margherita
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2003-04-08 08:12 AM

1slick_lady
A delicate touch, well done.
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