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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-04-08 02:23 AM


heart hurts
I walk the path of a million
lovley
make me squirm
eliminate the sensible
fade gently
into oblivion
exploding like the truth
destiny blows me a kiss
destroy my good sense
kill the idea
got to run away
opaque
dont fake your smiles with me
dont break
outline your face
with my finger
place your hand on my cheek
so clean
when we're between sheets
just ache
when i walk away
just forget me
when i come back and beg
i would give you everything
if u asked me

© Copyright 2003 Talia - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-04-08 06:10 AM


Enjoyed...James
redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
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honolulu, hawaii
2 posted 2003-04-09 07:25 AM


really smooth read, sad thoughts
Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding
3 posted 2003-04-09 03:29 PM


hi good write thaks for shairing
<-- hehe funny

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Georgia
4 posted 2003-04-09 04:24 PM


Very nice
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
5 posted 2003-04-10 09:49 PM


Talia - this is hard now isnt it?

just forget me
when i come back and beg
i would give you everything
if u asked me

know this well - nice write xxoo

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