Open Poetry #25 |
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Tell Me |
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theresa0847 New Member
since 2002-11-13
Posts 6 |
I don’t know how to tell you. For the word “love” seems to simple to use. The feeling I have in the depth of my heart Is a feeling men have often abused. With you this world seems so clear. There are no worries and I no longer fear. You take me to a place. And in it, a strong passion lingers here. With you I am swept away. Swept away like a breeze on a hot summer’s day. The way a desert thirsts for rain. It is how my soul screams your name. I live off your love. I breathe through each kiss. My body hungers for your touch. For it brings eternal bliss. Being without you, Is something I cannot foresee. This world holds no meaning, If you can’t share it with me. Tell me this now… Tell me just one thing… Tell me you’ll love me… For all eternity… ~Theresa Rodriguez |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's a nice thing to hear...beautiful write |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Theresa: Tell me this now… Tell me just one thing… I loved this - truly . . . know it xxoo |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
bravo with this one A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Dance Junior Member
since 2003-03-28
Posts 34 |
The right words just seem to flow straight from your heart. Good job! ~*~DANCE~*~ ![]() |
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