Open Poetry #25 |
In love |
theresa0847 New Member
since 2002-11-13
Posts 6 |
I woke up this morning As the sun lit my heart, I thought of you beside me. What a wonderful way to start. I turned over hoping to see The perfect love in you. But sadness filled my soul As I told myself, “Five more days to go.” I prayed that morning to sleep this week through. All day and night ‘till your flight arrived that noon. I lay there like a child, Squeezing my eyes so tight. To open them and only see The same bright morning light. I missed you that morning Unlike any other day. To be so in love, If only words could explain. That morning “I miss you” Was all this mind would let me say. But “So in love” Was what my soul sang. ~Theresa Rodriguez |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
Beautiful poem! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Five more days to go! Whoo Hooo, and I could read the anticipation in every word of your poem. Nicely composed piece. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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