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theresa0847
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since 2002-11-13
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0 posted 2003-04-08 01:16 AM


Sounds floated though these skies.
Across the room is where she lies.
Her laughter made him smile.
And he stared at her for a little while.

She sang to him his favorite song.
Each night went by in each other’s arms.
He held her in a tight embrace.
They would always conquer whatever came their way.

Sounds floated through these skies.
Across the room is where he lies.
His whispers made her smile.
She knew what would come in a little while.

Kissing her softly,
He hovered over her that night.
Told her he would always love her,
And that everything would be all right.
They made love at that moment
And held each other tight.
Together, forever
Is how they’d lived this life.

Sounds floated through these skies.
Across the room is where they lie.
The thought of their future made them smile.
Time seemed to stand still… for a little while.

~Theresa Rodriguez


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Dark Angel
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1 posted 2003-04-08 06:06 AM


This is lovely, made me smile.

Welcome to Passions.. please check your email for a special greeting.


Maree

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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2 posted 2003-04-09 02:15 AM


Theresa - Welcome to PIP!  Very nice thoughts and writing - you will love it here . . . xxoo
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-04-09 10:28 AM


Welcome to Passions, and from the tone of your first post, you have come to the right place!  

Warm, welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2003-04-09 12:12 PM



Welcome to Passions!  I think you're going to like it here!  

          Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2003-04-09 01:37 PM


very  nice.

M

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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6 posted 2003-04-09 01:39 PM


Welcome To Passions!!!!
Your first post is bookworthy indeed!!!!
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
7 posted 2003-04-10 12:02 PM


this poem definitely needs to be in
the book. my heart warmed and i smiled
so bright while reading this. nothing
like sweet love...ahhhh
take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

vandana
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8 posted 2003-04-10 12:12 PM


welcome to passions enjoyed vote fot this one
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2003-04-10 05:53 PM


Enjoyed...James
Midnitesun
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Gaia
10 posted 2003-04-10 06:04 PM


Very sensual, very nicely done!
Welcome to these passionate blue pages.

carol
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since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
Florida USA
11 posted 2003-04-12 10:26 PM


I loved it you got my vote it should be in the book
Rita

[This message has been edited by carol (04-12-2003 10:27 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel
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12 posted 2003-04-12 10:28 PM




(sigh) Oh Theresa, this is a gorgeous debut, sweet friend, this is filled with such embers and sparks of poetic passion, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Theresa, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Theresa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Paul Wilson
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13 posted 2003-04-12 11:21 PM


Theresa~ First WELCOME TO PASSIONS, our poetry home.I really hope to read more of your poems soon...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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California Desert
14 posted 2003-04-13 09:06 PM


Much enjoyed.
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