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Open Poetry #25

poem for a girl

j0n4th4n
Member

since 2003-03-11

Posts 94

0 posted 2003-04-07 02:28 PM

when i meet with you
it seems
the sun shines in beauty
and the breeze flies in colours

when you and me talk
a wildfire love runs in me,
seeking to touch, i take
hold of your hand.
when you respond,
my heart's sloping rhythm
is altered,
sending joy
through my body

when i can hold you
and see you
in front of me,
there's no holding
my passion for you,
it makes my skin
tingle like stars.

the feel of your hand,
soft and fragile, powers
strength into me;
like showers of fresh rain
falling onto thirsty ground.
i feel i could break mountains
and smash moons for you!

now, i put your hair
back behind your ear
to show i love you.

[This message has been edited by j0n4th4n (04-07-2003 02:29 PM).]

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-04-07 02:50 PM

Very pretty

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-04-07 06:12 PM

Enjoyed...really like the last three lines...James

j0n4th4n
Member

since 2003-03-11

Posts 94

3 posted 2003-04-08 11:55 AM

thanks

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-04-08 10:56 PM

jon - this is just beautiful - putting her hair behind her ears . . . very nice writing xxoo

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