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Amadeus, Wine and Me
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Amadeus, Wine and Me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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It's a muggy day, today, And April showers take their time to find their way to New Orleans so I thought I'd spice some wine and pour it over ice. There's box fans in the windows revolving white noise to the time signature of Mozart grace. I trace a cube upon my neck and watch the tiny rivulet disappear between my breasts tracing delicate black lace of slip-- I ponder Wolfgang's hands. It's been told that his hands were of such a size that they could span the keys creating chords of quivering and delicately hammering beyond the capabilities of average generalities-- lingering beyond timeline. I listened, pondering his hands as his passion pounded me ice in melt it disappeared within the "vee" of heat. I sipped my wine and stole again cube of ice from the glass, and he played me once again-- Amadeus, wine and me? Oh yes. It must be spring... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'll take the muggy over the chill... pour another glass, dear, and we'll invite them all... Mozart, Bach, Beethoven.... and let the windows rattle... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yes ma'am...and? I do believe it's beginning to pour...  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, it's about to start pouring here, too.....and muggy.. Heart Hugs,  Ethel . . (Psstt!! I like the way you very carefullygot the heat melting the ice....) |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
~sigh~ what a picture you paint. takes me back to my one visit to New Orleans. yes, it was raining then too, but it did nothing to dampen the fond memories i have for that wonderful weekend. i can almost hear the whir of the fan blades and the patter of rain on the street..... |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
 Hot write Cool touch Thomas |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'It's getting hot in here, so take off all...'  And to think, it was snowing here just a few minutes ago!![This message has been edited by Duncan (04-07-2003 02:34 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh myyyy..sure nuff...darn near melted all the snow in Canada girl! Dang this is good! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am smiling at you girlie.... haha...loving your humidity.. but then I always have had a thing for "mardi gras heat" Very very cool write of metaphor and analogy baby..youre playing poetry like the he did the piano ... as for that spring fever? ... send vials...LOL  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I can almost see the movie...I'd like to see the movie...sensual writing...James |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
You better cut that out witch! (damnedwitchmumblegrumble) I just lit my WOODSTOVE!!!!! (grabnabbinwitch) Sheesh! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Good grief, you even dried up some Oregon rain with this steam. Lovely picture words. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
damn...thats hot..unlike here friggin snow and ice [edited] when the [edited] is [edited] winter gonna [edited] end?! [Edited by Moderator. Note, "Misspelling a word, using asterisks to mask some or all letters, or any other attempt to disguise profanity doesn't make it any less profane." Guidelines [This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-09-2003 10:28 AM).] |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
and his touch... on the keys sound like ice cubes melting watch them notes disappear...... in the "vee"  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You are hilarious, what no mention of any mailman or delivery man? LOL. This reminds me out of some southern movie yanno? |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow Luscious....It's suddenly warm in here. A very hot write indeed and terrific visual adding this to my library so that I may play it over and over again *winkies* @ ya Maree. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Trust me, Mysteria, I started to put him in, but he even spoiled MY mood!  (I told ya, he wasn't that attractive--now had it been the UPS guy...hmmm...  ) and...I do happen to know someone who delivers for the Chilly Willy Ice Co.! hmmm... (with love and winks to a few certain ladies who KNOW I'm not making this stuff up! ) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
hehehehehehe . . . . *wink* I'll say no more . . . . xxoo |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
you always have a special secret up your sleeve i've missed you been away in this wild world |
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