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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-04-07 09:57 AM

Awaking to the whiteness, blinding
but a soothing tickling sound
as it touches the rooftop
outside my window.

Winter's hold, fearful of letting go
reminding me how I am the same way,
not quite ready yet for the freshness
of a new season in my life.

Bruised a bit by nature's ills,
I am moving about sluggish at first,
but in time, consistency and speed
will take on a life of their own,
and I will be bending the rules,
once again, to make them mine.

I am peeking around the corners,
spying, to catch that first glimmer of hope
wanting to feel the cool on the heat of my thoughts,
waiting for the right words to enter,
and color my world in real.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-07-2003 10:10 AM).]

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-04-07 10:11 AM

Your poetry always colors the world in real!

Warm hugs,
EA

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-04-07 10:54 AM

Beautiful! Go on peeking around the corner and suddenly the gift of joy of life will unveil to you again.
Love, Margherita

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

3 posted 2003-04-07 11:51 AM

Only when we cannot go to corners are we bereft of hope. This is an elegant expression of first hope. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2003-04-07 12:09 PM

Hoping those glimmers soon shine bright , Maureen I wish only the best for you and hope future dreams all come true
Hope

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2003-04-07 12:34 PM

And succint words will come and vivid colors will be seen. Lovely poem.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-04-07 03:35 PM

WynterGal~

'I will be bending the rules,
once again, to make them mine.'

Oh yes ... *huglets*~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-04-08 06:04 AM

Yes...just around the corner...James

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-04-09 01:58 AM

nakd -

I am peeking around the corner with you - this is soooo meeee . . . . amazing xxoo

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

9 posted 2003-04-09 02:06 AM

wonderful M

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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