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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-04-06 05:16 PM

An emptiness, I'll fill,  I think
With bitterness and poison drink
My amber mistress, in a glass
She keeps me standing near the brink

Its past and pain, she numbs, she knows
With every drink, the darkling grows
My amber mistress, in a glass
She pays my price in coin she chose

I raise my crystal, in salute
I laugh and know she'll follow suit
My amber mistress in a glass
We toast to weakness,  undilute

She whispers, take me, I am yours
I'll hide your  pain behind locked doors
My amber mistress in a glass
Will save my soul, so she assures

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (04-06-2003 11:08 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-04-06 05:25 PM

Aye..she's a wicked one, she is...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-04-06 05:31 PM

Nice your giving her a voice ... so you can tell her a few things too ...
Love, Margherita

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

3 posted 2003-04-06 10:43 PM

Sudsing it up are you Jason? I liked this very much as I do all your writes so my vote is cast.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-04-07 12:38 PM

tis be true - my friend . . . nice metaphor - nice write - making a beer sound really good right now . . . . xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-04-07 04:24 AM

cheers!

Gina Culliney
Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 170

6 posted 2003-04-08 09:07 PM

You sent me back to Poe time once more, Jason. How do you achieve such astonishing musical effects in perfect meter in your work! You got me asking for mo' Po', Please!But until the next lyrical write, salute to weakness as I raise my wine glass to your amber mistress!

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2003-04-08 10:41 PM

Jason,

Wonderfully written.

Enjoyed greatly,

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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