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Where Does Forever Start
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Where Does Forever Start |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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I been thinkin bout people who watched thier happiness grow and through good times and bad times they let thier loyalty show but these days I see them fading oh I just can't figure out why there's so many sad people willing to toss good love aside Chorus: Oh how can love last forever if lovers keep drifting apart if there's no tommorrow after together where does forever start Oh I see heart hungry lovers searchin for a love that's true but lawyers keep on teaching how the I comes before you. Chorus: Oh how can love last forever if lovers keep drifting apart if there's no tommorrow after together where does forever start The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, I can hear a blues tune in this one. Indeed, where does forever begin and end? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of a day many years ago when I went to court and told the judge that I didn't want a divorce. The judge straightened me out...she said if one person doesn't want the marriage the marriage no longer exists...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
there he is...a favorite of mine.. it is amazing how many throw away love isn't it? hugss E M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome...this IS set to music...I hope you'll provide us a link again, soon, so we can enjoy.... |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Stunning and filled with truth...I guess true love can only grow when the I's figure out they are now a We and work to keep it forever....It is amazing how we think true love needs so little effort when the truth is all love needs work to keep it fresh and growing...Hugs to you, my friend. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
brilliant! a sure hit |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Forever starts with the hint of a smile and breath of a kiss. It grows through the years with compassion and trust. It's sealed with love and respect. Some people never get beyond the first stage and realize it's a commitment. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good one! I can hear the music! awesome! write on! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ethome, I love this love song. It is beautiful. There can be forever if both people want it bad enough.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
ET~ is back... LOL... thanks for this... and hope you turn up more often... Most enjoyed, regards, sudhir |
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LUV_R_GIRL2379 Junior Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 42 |
i loved this one! very true..people are always throwing good love aside? why? i dont know either.. i think forever starts from the time your lover steals your heart! keep up the good work! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric...you are always a melody with wise words. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Eric: but these days I see them fading oh I just can't figure out why there's so many sad people willing to toss good love aside you have a song here for sure, my friend excellent write xxoo |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ethome - another well written song to touch. Nice one... BC |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
"if there's no tommorrow after together where does forever start" Very impactful and so profound. Enjoyed this, I love to hear the melody as I can almost sense it. SG |
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