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MissKlarmic
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since 2003-02-20
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Canada,N.S

0 posted 2003-04-05 10:40 PM


Mommy why'd you do it why'd you leave my dad
Didn't we have enough problems?Did you have to make him mad?
Mommy why'd you leave us, your 4 loving kids
Were we so very hard to have to put up with?
Steph's all grown up now , but i see it in her eyes
her hearts been broken from your lies , her hearts soaked with cries.
Ash is disturbed as usual but now its even worse
I see her on the streets and all she does is curse
She's angry at you , her and him  at the world at her work and at everything within
Dan`s still a kid now don't take to much to heart
Im sure he didn't mean to hurt you , its just one of life's parts
you think you could hurt him and he'd be just fine
revenge is what he's after if u think not you`d be blind
I, Im all alone now mommy sitting in the dark
Writing u this poem about how much this hurts
maybe if you told us when it first began
we wouldn't be so angry and would know where to stand
your selfish deeds broke all our hearts  that's all i seem to see
another pill wont fix this mommy this time leave it be
Im 18 years old now , yet i still need you
you were never there before its about time u paid your dues
Send me to counseling thinking it`ll be fixed in a day
only a couple more sessions till im out of the way
I`ll tell you mommy  your missing a big part
of who your children are and how much you've ripped apart.
You can sit there crying, feeling sorry for yourself
In the end this is all your fault mommy
you broke daddy's heart.
your tore our family apart.

[This message has been edited by MissKlarmic (04-05-2003 10:42 PM).]

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2003-04-06 04:02 AM


This is heartwrenching dear friend! A heartfelt and powerful write!
I do hope your Mom will understand and feel your love. Don't sit in the dark sweet friend, go out into the sun, it will help you to cope with these difficult moments.
Hugs. Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2003-04-06 05:01 AM


geez...that's sad...
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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3 posted 2003-04-06 03:03 PM


Nice expression of your feelings...James
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