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Startime55
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0 posted 2003-04-05 08:48 PM



A Dream...A Vision...A Truth

He came...from dreamtime...each night
woven through desires unchecked
reached for with my empty arms
A dream...designed for me...til light

He came...through the mist...surreal
a phantom to warm my bed
to keep a heart from dying
A vision...within my soul...ideal

He came...in the day...sunshine
with eyes that flash gypsy light
and lips that hunger to kiss
A truth... love seeking...divine

He came...arms open...arrived
thirsting for the quenching drink
from lips whose hunger met his
A man...so handsome...alive

Startime


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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-04-05 08:53 PM


WOW!!  You sure have been missed here Karen!!
Beautifully romantic... I'm so glad to see you back here.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-04-05 09:15 PM




(smiles) Oh Karen, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, so great to read your romantic words again! (big hugggsssssss) I hope now your vision has been fulfilled and the truth is out to you, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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just out of reach
3 posted 2003-04-05 09:22 PM


Very nice indeed Karen! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2003-04-05 09:53 PM


Startime55 - beautiful write...

BC

Albert J. Allie
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5 posted 2003-04-05 11:35 PM


Yes. You HAVE been missed.
Beautiful!!!


Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2003-04-06 12:33 PM


Ah, romance! Nicely done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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7 posted 2003-04-06 06:13 AM


Star - once again - quite amazing:

with eyes that flash gypsy light
and lips that hunger to kiss

loved these lines - and this?  Is lovely
xxoo

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
8 posted 2003-04-06 06:47 AM


A lovely write.
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-04-06 04:50 PM


Some dreams come true...James
ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
10 posted 2003-04-06 07:12 PM


These lips left parch ....

     ... again!!

  Good to share words with you once again Karen.  
        **S

[This message has been edited by ctowen (04-07-2003 01:40 AM).]

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
11 posted 2003-04-25 07:48 PM


You were always such a romantic...

hugs
M

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