Open Poetry #25 |
A Dream...A Vision...A Truth |
Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A Dream...A Vision...A Truth He came...from dreamtime...each night woven through desires unchecked reached for with my empty arms A dream...designed for me...til light He came...through the mist...surreal a phantom to warm my bed to keep a heart from dying A vision...within my soul...ideal He came...in the day...sunshine with eyes that flash gypsy light and lips that hunger to kiss A truth... love seeking...divine He came...arms open...arrived thirsting for the quenching drink from lips whose hunger met his A man...so handsome...alive Startime |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! You sure have been missed here Karen!! Beautifully romantic... I'm so glad to see you back here. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Karen, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, so great to read your romantic words again! (big hugggsssssss) I hope now your vision has been fulfilled and the truth is out to you, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice indeed Karen! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Startime55 - beautiful write... BC |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Yes. You HAVE been missed. Beautiful!!! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Ah, romance! Nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Star - once again - quite amazing: with eyes that flash gypsy light and lips that hunger to kiss loved these lines - and this? Is lovely xxoo |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A lovely write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Some dreams come true...James |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
These lips left parch .... ... again!! Good to share words with you once again Karen. **S [This message has been edited by ctowen (04-07-2003 01:40 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You were always such a romantic... hugs M |
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