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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2003-04-05 07:40 PM

As you pluck the strings
on your silent guitar
I wonder if you remember
who you really are,
the love you offered
with each new note,
the heart upon which
your lifetime lover did dote
before the fall
of your body and mind.

You are still...

the high note of love
to at least one quiet heart
who lives within the memoried cadence
that was your every step,
your naturally smooth rhythm,
your splendid soulful tune
that sang out in love
December to June
and then carried through
to December again
until the final chord
struck you down,
left you as quiet as the morning dew.

Do you remember?
I do.
I shall remember
for both of us,
until the final
crescendo
leaves us
both
in silence.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2003-04-05 07:44 PM

A precious memory that fills your heart with warmth....*sigh* so very beautiful...I love it.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-04-05 07:50 PM

*sigh*
Thank you, dear friend. Your warm replies have been greatly missed!
PS I wrote this while listening to a Joe Satriani guitar tune called "You saved my Life"

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (04-05-2003 07:52 PM).]

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-04-05 10:31 PM

Simply beautiful.
Eric

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-04-05 10:44 PM

Kacy~ I love the melancholy tune
and the melody of memories
that took me back.

Beautiful, you~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (04-05-2003 11:19 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-04-05 11:16 PM

Kacy~This is very beautiful..
It touched me deeply tonight..thank you.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

6 posted 2003-04-05 11:21 PM

nice write....

Iused to listen to Joe Satriani quite a bit... havent heard anything of his in a long time... : )

~~ Connie ~~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-04-06 06:21 AM

Kacy - I know this too - now you ar ein my head missy:

Do you remember?
I do.
I shall remember
for both of us,

I will always remember . . . xxoo

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