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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-03-06 01:18 AM

A sentence,
this..life(?)

Shall I
repent then
on bended knee

Aquittal from
sins I have
never commited

This is
your way
to salvation

Or so you
have written

I need
new words
yours suit me not..

____________________________________________

a concept melting into a ramble, enough of
this day.. time for sleep or total collapse
whichever comes first kiddies...nite nite

sweetwater
Member

since 2002-12-16

Posts 178
Perth

1 posted 2003-03-06 01:30 AM

I got a powerful message from this poem. Touched me, because I've not had the words to describe so eloqently the theme you have described here. Thankyou for this wonderful poem.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-03-06 01:37 AM

This is amazing - I have to keep going back to it - the best part is how you question life - as in "whatever you call what I am doing here" - again - as always - questioning the man - this is a keeper - although I know you were grrrr at Him writing it - also the way in which you "demand" answers - excellent Raph - your words always inspire me to write more xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-06-2003 01:56 AM).]

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

3 posted 2003-03-06 08:02 AM

be your own god, write your own words. live by the words of your conscience and subconcious thoughts. sometimes, dont listen to both, and just have fun. got me thinking this one did. as you may have guessed.lol. into my library this goes Raph

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-03-06 11:03 PM

reminds me of a scene in Annie Hall, did u see it? the dinner table split families scene, when his family
is asked what are they atoning for , what sins, and they anser, stuffing food in their mouths "we don't know".......

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

5 posted 2003-03-06 11:20 PM

I need
new words
yours suit me not..
******************************************

The ultimate in insults.. I love it.
Yet another great job.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-03-06 11:50 PM

thanks sweetwater very kind

Sue if I inspire then thats the greatest compliment of all thank you.

thanks gemma and yes i know these things, every once and awhile though i digress and miss the fairy tale

Mish lol yes I've seen it love that movie, the part in line with the author..classic

Thanks Ringo love the name btw

Gina Culliney
Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 170

7 posted 2003-04-03 10:38 PM

Very somber but sobering thoughts.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-04-04 12:13 PM

Thank you very much Gina, yes a lesson learned the long and hard way

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

9 posted 2003-04-04 12:21 PM

does God judge
or is it man judging in Gods name

awesome write

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-04-05 11:20 AM

Aquittal from
sins I have
never commited

EXACTLY!

You know when I first read this - I was still being nice to you . . . now that I know you - I am in awe . . . always amazing me still . . . always coming back to your writing . . . like a magnet xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (04-05-2003 11:24 AM).]

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

11 posted 2003-04-05 12:33 PM

I could not have asked this better, though I have asked it.
Jason

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2003-04-05 12:59 PM

you're good at the (edited by moderator)ones too

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-06-2003 05:07 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

13 posted 2003-04-05 04:15 PM

Dreambuilder thats the million dollar question, unfortunately how many are willing to ask it, or worse receive the answer

Thanks Sue, yeah you stopped being nice to me along time ago lol Kidding, thanks for reading and the support and well,everything

Jason then you're one of the openminded or cursed few lol

Dixie I like to think I specialize (edit by moderator) lol

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-06-2003 05:17 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

14 posted 2003-04-06 03:28 AM

yw . . .

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

15 posted 2003-04-06 09:13 AM

Maybe you do not need new words, but new insights ... the answers to many mysteries can be found WITHIN. You question very efficiently .... listen with the same dedication and a whole new world will unfold for you. For certain people WE (yes I am a "rebel" too!) are just too open-minded. But the voice inside knows better.
Grazie Raffaele ... sei come uno specchio per me. I do love HIM with all my heart, but there is certainly more than one way to ENLIGHTENMENT..... and words can be very confusing.
Margherita

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