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He Whispers
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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“Why?” he whispers... As a delicate ear turns against the softened lie. As a heartbeat lingers upon the touch of a fingers trace over soft and delicate lips. As tresses fall upon the cascade of a silken highway to eternal shivers of a moment. Oh but to taste the wine of a moon’s beam flowing a babbling brook. To take the glow into the palm of one’s hand and smell the freshness of a morning’s dew. Yes.....why........ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
AND...he's back! Thank you Lord... we've been wondering  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Indeed he whispers as he blows the question softly into her ear. Gently said from a master of the heart....hi there, my friend. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
BARRY! Where have you been???!! Never mind that.. get over here and give me a big hug!!  Oooh great poem too! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"To take the glow into the palm of one’s hand and smell the freshness of a morning’s dew." So very beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - missed you and good to see you again with this great write... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well now, here you are...and with a beautiful piece of writing for all of us to enjoy. Missed you dear Magnus my friend. hugs to you, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mmmmwwwwaaaahhhhh!--angel kisses on cheek! Oh, Magnanimous One--you have been sorely missed!!!! Hope you are well and that you will be sticking around for awhile!---a loooooong while! From reading this poem, it appears to me that you are still in fine poetic form and you haven't lost your sensual touch! Lovin' hugs, EA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Indeed you have been missed....this is ever so soft and beautiful.... Lauren~ Through the darkness |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
yes...you have been missed so very much and here you are again to absolutely shine in a Magnus style that we adore. I sure do pray all is well with you, my friend. Big hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Our King Magnus  Goodness we miss you when you're gone, friend. It's so good to see you back, Barry. Now, do you want the PIP possee to come looking for you? Well, you'd better stay around and give us more of your wonderful poetry.....like only YOU can write. Heart Hugs, friend Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
missed you much |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...What a delightful and beautiful piece of writing this is. I love this style of writing from you. It is so powerful, so entrancing. Missed reading your wonderful writing. ***Ivy Rose PS: You should have submitted this for the book because it is just beautiful. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I had to read this three times before I could think of anything to say to this, and I must say that it is absolutely beautiful. You've been missed, Barry, I'm very glad to see you back  Life may be hard, but it's your attitude that determines your happieness |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beautiful Barry...yes you have been missed thank you for such a warm poem M |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Barry, Wonderful to read you again. I thought everything which could has been written about the moon. But, leave it to you to come up with unique imagery of such a common sight. I love this poem...and this: "Oh but to taste the wine of a moon's beam flowing a babbling brook" oh my, how great is that!!! Glad to see you back. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ I thought I heard 'whispering' on the back pages .... so glad I was listening~ This is just lovely~ 'Oh but to taste the wine of a moon’s beam flowing a babbling brook' Oh my ! *sigh* *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
As tresses fall upon the cascade of a silken highway to eternal shivers of a moment. love it... had to read it again *s M |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I enjoyed reading it again, too. I miss reading your poems so much, Barry. Hugs, Ethel |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry...This is breathtaking!!  |
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