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When Sun RIses
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When Sun RIses |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Let the day turn Into night Let the love burns TIll the dawn To the morning When sun sets at night When sun rises up the morning love stays up Till the morning light Love Is like a morning dawn Roses fades slowly When sun rises up the morning Down the hill To the riverside Sun rises up the morning The sun stay up long way Long day To shine away When sun rises When love keeping fading Into burning sun Turning the clouds away When sun rises...... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful images and feelings. Very tangible love, merging with the rising sun ... Love, Margherita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Vandana, this is lovely, sweet friend, and may the sun continue to rise in your heart eahc coming day with a greeting kiss and a smile as delicious as a pillow mint! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, soon I'll e-mail you the new poem lines, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Like the sun...love rises every day to warm the heart and light our lives....I love this poem.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vandana...what a melody! You are becoming quite the poetess.... your heart is singing! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed vandana...James |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
very nice, enjoyed. |
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