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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-04-03 12:47 PM


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*~~*
Treasures
Sweet memories
To cherish for always
To be kept safely tucked away
Memories built upon through years of love
Captured from a kiss or a touch
A glance, a smile, or words
Sweet memories
Treasures
*~~*

    




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1 posted 2003-04-03 12:51 PM


Your poems are "Treasures"! Your memories are so sweet...  

Love & Light,
Linda


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2 posted 2003-04-03 12:58 PM


Thank you, Linda.
You are so sweet.
Hugs,
Ethel

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3 posted 2003-04-03 01:03 PM


Oh yes! Good memories are indeed a treasure.
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4 posted 2003-04-03 01:17 PM


Sue, what would we do without them.  

Heart Hugs,  
Ethel

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Love this... Love this! A beautiful color!
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6 posted 2003-04-03 01:29 PM


Thank you, Dixie. Is the
color too light to read good?
Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-04-03 03:39 PM


Awesome!
Eric

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8 posted 2003-04-04 11:18 PM




(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is beautiful, sweet friend, yay, I love this, may sweet memories of love always shine in your heart and bring light to your smile! (kiss on cheek) This is precious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2003-04-05 10:15 AM


enjoyed
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10 posted 2003-04-05 11:18 AM


Ethel,
you just summed up why we live our lives...so as to create and capture such memories of course...

i'm afraid i strained my eyes a weeny bit though

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11 posted 2003-04-05 11:44 AM


yes, indeed... what a wonderful way of putting thoughts to words...

regards,
sudhir

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12 posted 2003-04-05 12:01 PM


This is very lovely in content and form!
May each day "produce" new memories to treasure!
Love, Margherita

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13 posted 2003-04-05 12:07 PM


GarysGirl~
And you do these rictameters extremely well~

This is just so lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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14 posted 2003-04-05 12:21 PM


Eric,
thank you so much.  
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.
Noah,
Thank you and I'm glad that you liked it.  
.
.
Vandana,
I'm really glad that you enjoyed it.
.
.
Kaile,
thank you....and, is th color better?
.
.
Heart Hugs to you all,  
Ethel

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15 posted 2003-04-05 12:26 PM


Sudhir,
thank you. I really appreciate it.  
.
.
Margherita,
Oh yes, I hope so, too. thank you.
.
.
Marge,
You are one of the ones that I've used for
my examples to learn. You are a master at
writing this form, as well as all other
forms of poetry. Thank you so much.
.
Heart Hugs to you all,
Ethel

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16 posted 2003-04-05 12:57 PM


Awwwwwwwwwww !

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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You're just having too much fun!  Get to the Poetry Workshop young lady...we have a new treat in store for you!

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18 posted 2003-04-05 01:17 PM


THANK YOU
Marge and Karilea!!

I'm going.

Ethel

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19 posted 2003-04-05 10:40 PM


Ethel,
yes!

good luck on those acrostics

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20 posted 2003-04-05 11:10 PM


Ethel, I really like this it is very nice

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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21 posted 2003-04-05 11:12 PM


Kaile, I don't think they're going to come
as easy for me as these do. I'm trying, though.
thanks,
Ethel

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22 posted 2003-04-05 11:15 PM


Thank you, Rita. I'm really
glad that you like it.  
Hugs,
Ethel

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23 posted 2003-04-05 11:40 PM


Great work as usual!!!!!!!!


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24 posted 2003-04-06 01:17 AM


Thank you very much, Albert.
I appreciate that.
Hugs,
Ethel

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25 posted 2003-04-06 12:06 PM


...This piece, too, is a treasure...

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26 posted 2003-04-06 12:08 PM


Thank you, teacher. I guess you can tell
that I love to do these. I've done a lot
of them this month. Thanks for teaching us how.

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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27 posted 2003-04-06 12:15 PM


Writing
Great expressions
Salient times in life
Grasped in the core of our being
Sharing the elation of feeling 'home'
Places where heart and soul commune
Reaching to savor them
Can't wait to share
Writing

Is a "rictamate" a rictameter buddy?? Can I be yours?  lol  
Always enjoy your sense of your love.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light


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28 posted 2003-04-06 12:18 PM


Treasures indeed...priceless beyond measure...I have many such memories that have been created by the wonderful people here at passions....I LOVE THIS POEM...It is wonderful.
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