Open Poetry #25 |
Memories Are Treasures...........(a rictameter, of course smile) |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
~~ ~~ *~~* Treasures Sweet memories To cherish for always To be kept safely tucked away Memories built upon through years of love Captured from a kiss or a touch A glance, a smile, or words Sweet memories Treasures *~~* [This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-05-2003 12:14 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poems are "Treasures"! Your memories are so sweet... Love & Light, Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Linda. You are so sweet. Hugs, Ethel |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh yes! Good memories are indeed a treasure. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, what would we do without them. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Love this... Love this! A beautiful color! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Dixie. Is the color too light to read good? Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Awesome! Eric |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is beautiful, sweet friend, yay, I love this, may sweet memories of love always shine in your heart and bring light to your smile! (kiss on cheek) This is precious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Ethel, you just summed up why we live our lives...so as to create and capture such memories of course... i'm afraid i strained my eyes a weeny bit though [This message has been edited by kaile (04-05-2003 11:18 AM).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
yes, indeed... what a wonderful way of putting thoughts to words... regards, sudhir |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very lovely in content and form! May each day "produce" new memories to treasure! Love, Margherita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GarysGirl~ And you do these rictameters extremely well~ This is just so lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, thank you so much. . . Noah, Thank you and I'm glad that you liked it. . . Vandana, I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. . . Kaile, thank you....and, is th color better? . . Heart Hugs to you all, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sudhir, thank you. I really appreciate it. . . Margherita, Oh yes, I hope so, too. thank you. . . Marge, You are one of the ones that I've used for my examples to learn. You are a master at writing this form, as well as all other forms of poetry. Thank you so much. . Heart Hugs to you all, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-05-2003 12:27 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Awwwwwwwwwww ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You're just having too much fun! Get to the Poetry Workshop young lady...we have a new treat in store for you! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
THANK YOU Marge and Karilea!! I'm going. Ethel |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Ethel, yes! good luck on those acrostics |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ethel, I really like this it is very nice Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kaile, I don't think they're going to come as easy for me as these do. I'm trying, though. thanks, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Rita. I'm really glad that you like it. Hugs, Ethel |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Great work as usual!!!!!!!! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you very much, Albert. I appreciate that. Hugs, Ethel |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...This piece, too, is a treasure... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, teacher. I guess you can tell that I love to do these. I've done a lot of them this month. Thanks for teaching us how. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Writing Great expressions Salient times in life Grasped in the core of our being Sharing the elation of feeling 'home' Places where heart and soul commune Reaching to savor them Can't wait to share Writing Is a "rictamate" a rictameter buddy?? Can I be yours? lol Always enjoy your sense of your love. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light [This message has been edited by kayjay (04-06-2003 12:18 PM).] |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Treasures indeed...priceless beyond measure...I have many such memories that have been created by the wonderful people here at passions....I LOVE THIS POEM...It is wonderful. |
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