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Black Streak |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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a lone tear falls from this face forlorn a streak of black slides its way . . . like they always slide their way into my heart Smiling I wonder . . . Why is it that those who say they love me I do not as they need me to . . . and those that I love do not see me like I need to be seen? [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-06-2003 05:37 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Sue, this stirs something! In a few well chosen words you powerfully express what seems to happen so often. Even though we are all connected, we are still individual Universes which not always move in parallels. Tell your heart to guide you to those who respond to your own feelings in a harmonious way. Love, Margherita  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
So tender and heartfelt. This is lovely. Eric |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Very heartfelt with a question we all ask from time to time....Well said....someday the one you love will see you just the way you want them too and your whole world will change. Great writing. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Reading my thoughts again, are you? LOL, some days I believe our brains and hearts are twins! You are a sweet soul sister. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - my eyes see what they see, a tender littlewing that writes her heart out... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very sweet and honest write. I enjoyed this littlewing. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
beautiful. you are quite the talent littlewing. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Maybe they're blind, maybe they're stupid maybe they're all of these things and worse? |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this one hurt. Thank you for sharing your heart with us. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch! |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Good question. I have been asking myself that for ages. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Sorry....I forgot to tell you I LOVED this read. Got caught up. See what you do? |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I don't know. Maybe some day that will change. This is a good poem, nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Don't it always seem to go~ Hugs little birdie~ I understand this slip and slide. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Why is it so? we may never know. Thank you for posting this one Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Margherita - how sweet your soul is . . . you know I do believe my heart is guiding me to that very place . . . thank you Ericc - thank you - always Star - I sure hope so - like soon . . . thank you Kacy - hehehe shhhhhh - dont tell anyone I can do that! Coming from you that means so much - I am smiling . . . thank you Bill - you are much too sweet for this world - thank you Night - thank you Edder - so very sweet - as are you . . . thank you Raph - blind and stupid - not a chance . . . maybe just trying to find their place . . . xxoo Ethel - thank you - always good to see you reading me - truly . . . Dixie - I know . . . Al - hahahahah - see what I do - hmmm . . . see and I thought I was the only one who felt like this . . . thank you Blues . . . somehow I knew you would . . .thank you K - yes - sadly - guess we must take it as it comes right? Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-06-2003 05:41 AM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I've often asked myself these questions of love, but alas, I've never found the answers.  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
It always seems that way doesn't it? enjoyed Maree |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Sue- You never cease to amaze. Such simple questions with not so simple answers. AND STOP TELLING PEOPLE ABOUT ME!!!!!! lol Another great job from one of the mistresses of the artform. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Maybe the mystery can be solved on paper! For what I see I love... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
this seems to be a perpetual affliction ... but it's effects are forgotten in the company of mutual infatuations good write |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
great question...when you find the answer..let meknow  hugss M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"like they always slide their way into my heart" You have an amazing way of expressing yourself... I absolutely and sincerely love the way you write! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Anne - thanks for the hug - needed it - those answers seem to elude the best of us . . . TY Maree - yes it does and I am getting quite tired lol TY Brad - heheheh . . . evil evil evil . . . thank you - you are much too kind . . . Larry - you are much too kind . . . TY Rex - exactly - good point - TY nakd - when I find the answers - I will surely email you - I promise lol Thanks guys xxoo |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Nancy - you snuck in there when I was replying . . . thank you - coming from you that means the world to me - TY xxoo |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Those black streaks, shimmer silver in this light... and reflect |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Very sweet . . . Silver raven . . . thank you Ed xxoo |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
my tears fall with you one day you will shine |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
How sweet dream - thank you so much! xxoo |
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Dreamer@ Junior Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 38Denmark |
Keep on going with searching for the answers you hide and seek they are there to be found ! Dreamer@ Life is for mee to be ! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Dreamer - always did know how to make me smile *smiling* xxoo |
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