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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2003-04-05 01:59 PM


Chards of lies
Embedded deep within
My dreams
The sands of time
Ever mocking
My every move
Lemonade tears
Sting my wounds
I should go
No really
I should go back
To where I belong
Beneath my bed
Back to my mother's womb
Perhaps?
That's if she'll even take me back
That's if it ever really
Was where I came from
She never wanted me anyways
I still cry
Still looking pretty
Atleast that's what
They say
When I'm all alone
I'm labled as a humble Pryncess
Stuck within a tower
I built
They built
Bleeding, retreating
Back within the sweet words
Of a midnight rendevous
Oh what I wouldn't give
To expose my soul naked
And to dance beneath the moon
But no
I can't..
I'm not able to at this moment
Instead I'm sitting here
Hands trembling
Body aching
From the thorns of disappointment
And the chards of lies
If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (04-05-2003 02:36 PM).]

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Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
1 posted 2003-04-05 04:08 PM


Apparentely I have no tear ducts or they just haven't been functioning. But this Kris, made me want to. Both from the sheer beauty of the write as well as the dull ache. But just because you're not ready now, doesn't mean you won't dance. I know you will and hope I'm there to see it because nude chick dancin, don't want to miss that.
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-04-05 04:46 PM


nice reply there geeeeeeeeeeeeeez . . .

Kris - you will fly - you do here - and Im sure with the help of Raph there - you will dance naked beneath the moon . . .

loved this . . .  be good to you   xxoo

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