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Open Poetry #25

Anvil

phunkimunkee
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since 2003-03-30

Posts 8

0 posted 2003-04-05 03:26 AM

Anvil

In the nocturnal hours of darkness there is
a lonely burden that weighs heavily on my chest
Its mass crushes my ambient thoughts to
a suffocating cliché of
reminiscent reminders and
inevitable occurrence.

This conscious dream has made me drenched with the
lament of love’s saddest page.
I long to sleep into a delightful escape;
but endless is this hopeless nightmare of actuality

The light of a blue moon is dispirited with its
arrangement of cardboard thoughts and dead roses
Soon this diurnal plight will be lost and so will my heart,
left alone
with this anvil.

[This message has been edited by phunkimunkee (04-05-2003 05:52 AM).]

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-04-05 06:59 AM

In the darkness, that anvil seems to be more profound, more weighty...I know. This is a powerful write, and leaves room for personal contemplation. And Welcome to Passions, as I see you are new here!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

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