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LastMoments
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0 posted 2003-04-04 08:41 PM



A stir of echoes follows me
They entwince, wrapping themselves
To the corners of my eyes
And the distant plains of my mind

Secrets whispered down to me
Were they meant for silence?
Trust enveloped by the winds
To pitch away in gray shadows

Memories, a stem of growth
The past like yesterday
A heart, a set of open wings
To shelter underneathe

As rain falls, a wish spoken
Enlightening the air
Splashing hopes across the ground
That lie inside your eyes

Do I pursue desire?
Or turn my back away?

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Under the stars upon the wind
1 posted 2003-04-04 10:37 PM


Great thoughts behind this!
You did well with presenting them.
I really enjoyed reading.

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Gaia
2 posted 2003-04-05 09:29 AM


Go forward. It's the only way you have two possible outcomes.
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